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Written by ~Fletcher~   
Sunday, 11 May 2008
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Steve awoke. He heard clanging,yelling,gun shots.

He quickly grabed his swicth blade he was only 13. His grandfather gave it to him he then remembered his words "This is only for when there is trouble" his grandfather had given it to him just before he died. He then threw open his bedroom door, there layed his father 3 big red spots on his chest,he looked up there stood a tall man dressed in black.

 The man was bleeding too, his dad clearly put up a good fight. He run at the man, the man pointed his gun.

 Steve ducked! BANG!!! Not a scratch on him he thought he was dead but he shot back up stabed the man right in the juggular, but not with out feeling a shooting pain in his side.

The man had shot Steve.
The man fell, down it was over. Steve looked into his parents room afriad the man got both his parents. No his mom was just knocked out on the bed she was gonna be ok he then called the police, it was over... But for how long why did this happen? So many emotions went through his head.



Copyright 2008 ~Fletcher~
Keyword: Sadness
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Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10
2008-05-11 18:35:40
grammar

Did i really need to put the warning in the title? I mean you guys know i stink at grammar.
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Posted by nick711
2008-05-11 20:11:15
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the grammar is horrible. i swear to god. but atleast you let me know before I judged you about it/
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