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Fatal Undertow


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Written by b.k.   
Sunday, 11 May 2008
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I watch you crumble,

right before my very eyes,

there's nothing i can do,

but listen to your silent cries,

 

You don't want my help,

your pride holds you back,

i reach out my hand,

but you retract,

 

Helplessly i watch,

as the undertow pulls you in,

keeping you captive,

and taking you within,

 

I have no choice,

but to keep distance,

or i too will fall,

to the water's persistence,

 

The last air bubble escapes,

as you finally drown,

never able to return,

you leave without sound,

 

I gape at the spot,

you once stood tall and strong,

now you're nonexistant,

nothings left; you're gone



Copyright 2008 b.k.
Keyword: Fatal Undertow
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-05-11 18:06:57
....

"so i guess i'm forced to move on". sorry, i just thought i'd add a line of my own. but seriously, really liked this. keep em coming please!!
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Posted by Xena
2008-05-11 20:21:47
yea

quicksand sucks
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