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The Real Story of Red Riding Hood Part 1


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Written by Robbie   
Friday, 09 May 2008

Lily Enderson was getting tired of being called Red Riding Hood. Just because she usually wore a red hoodie to school doesn't mean kids should treat her like a fairy tale.

Lily, having a good day right now, was walking down the hall when...

"Hey Red Riding Hood," a voice said.

Lily gritted her teeth and turned. She calmed down when she saw it was only her best friend, Ty, acting like his usual self, an ass.

"Shut up!" Lily laughed.

Somehow, whenever Ty called her Red Riding Hood, she was okay with it. Probably because she had the biggest crush on him.

"Sorry, hey, about the studying at my house tonight, I gotta cancel." Ty suddenly said.

"Huh? Why?"

"My uncle's coming over for dinner. He really wants to spend a lot of time with me, mostly cause I haven't seen him in ten years when I was six."

"Oh, that's cool. What about tommorow night?"

The bell rang.

"Sorry, gotta get to class!" Ty ran off.

Lily was then left in the hall, alone. "Well, I'm such a moron. I acted like a dumb bimbo around him!"

Lily went to class...

 

That night, she got the bad news.

"Lily," Mrs. Enderson said, "your Grandmother is very sick."

Lily's heart practically broke in half. Grandma Kat was the coolest Grandma ever, even for a sixteen year old like Lily.

"How sick?" Lily asked.

"Very. She might," a tear ran down Mrs. Enderson's face, "die."

Lily ran upstairs and covered her face in the pillow. Kat was going to croak. Lily always knew this day would come, but why so suddenly? She had talked to Kat over the phone yesterday and she was fine.

Lily cried herself to sleep that night. But at about 1:00 o'clock on the morning, her cell-phone rang.

We were born for this! was what blared out of the phone, which was a song by Paramore, Lily's favorite song.

Lily awoke and flipped it open.

"Yeah?"

"Lil," Ty said, "I heard about your Grandma. Hope she feels better."

"Thanks," Lily said, and then laughed, "why didn't you tell me in the morning?"

"Technically, this is morning. Ha ha!" Ty was crazy sometimes. "Sorry bout waking you."

"Gee, that's okay, I love getting calls this late. Just kidding. See ya." Lily closed the phone.

 

The next day, she had another crappy day at school. But after that, her mother told her some good news.

"Grandma's getting better."

"Yes!" Lily practically shouted.

"Yeah, she took some kind of pill that really did the trick. But she's still very sick, and I was wondering if you could take these to her." Mrs. Enderson held out a get-well basket.

"Awesome, sure." Lily was afraid to go all the way into the woods to her Grandma's house. But she'd be okay. If only she had known...



Copyright 2008 Robbie
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Comments (9)
Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-05-09 14:32:29
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This story didn’t really capture my attention like the your other stories did. Perhaps the next chapter will?
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Posted by wbboomer
2008-05-09 14:39:45
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i have to agree with you behind the mask
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Posted by wbboomer
2008-05-09 14:39:53
Well Behind The Mask,

This is part one of, maybe three or four, maybe five. I dunno. I haven't written everything yet. But this is just the beginning of the story. Without this, it would start out as her in the woods alone, and that wouldn't be good without this explanation. This part is the explanation for everything.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-05-09 14:43:27
ok

That is completely understandable, but compared to some of your other writings, that are in parts/chapeters, the reason why I continued to read the sequential parts was because the first part hooked me, but I think that the remainder of the story shall be good.
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Posted by wbboomer
2008-05-09 15:48:05
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Wait, the comment that says "I have to agree with you behind the mask," I didn't write that! Scary :~{
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-05-09 15:57:37
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it was I

just another damn comment glitch
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Posted by wbboomer
2008-05-09 16:40:53
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Damn you you effing comment glitches!!! lol
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Posted by wbboomer
2008-05-11 18:11:45
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Also, just a little hint for next part: The Paramore song as the ringtone happens to VERY important...
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Posted by lx_bz
2008-05-15 10:17:35
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i want the next part of the story!!!!!please
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