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Short Stories Poetry I Don't Want It Back
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I Don't Want It Back |
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| Written by Michael Dover | |
| Friday, 09 May 2008 | |
Are you trying
To give me back my heart?
I gave it to you,
It's yours to keep.
If you don't take it back,
I'll lay it at your feet.
I can't stand myself.
If it's not my faul
Whose could it be?
You tell me I'm perfect,
But it won't work.
Oh God, what are You doing?
How can you do this?
Do you know what
It's doing to me?
Do you even care?
How could you?
It's what you're doing.
My heart feels stomped,
I feel betrayed.
I like you so much,
I pray it doesn't end this way.
Comments (3) |
 05-09-2008 12:11, nice poem indeed. spoke to me in many different ways. i'm sure the person doesn't care that you feel betrayed. they never do. they just rip your heart out and then leave you to yourself so you can watch your body slowly decompose from depression. » Reply to this comment...  05-10-2008 10:59, I disagree. I'm sure people have felt bad for betrayal. Your poem is sweet in a sense. Like a little puppy who did something wrong. It feels terrible to have to replace your heart, and you portrayed that emotion perfectly. Very nice poem. » Reply to this comment...  05-12-2008 15:57, if this is true im so sorry for you. i have felt this way before and it sucks it feels like you arent goin to make it through the day but you do and eventually you will get over it so just stay strong and there is always someone better » Reply to this comment... |
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