Wearing a hot pink school dress

I stood in the packed bus

Waiting for the person sitting next

To get off so that I could sit

A boy runs to the side of the bus

And yells to the lady

Can you give this to that girl?

The one with pink dress

And big blue flowery clips

Yes this is me

The girl in pink dress with blue clips

I grabbed the letter from the lady's hand

And hoping the bus could go faster

So that I could read it at home

As soon as I got off the bus

I started to rain

I ran quickly towards my house

To save the letter from getting wet

But when I got home

The letter was ruined

As I was still holding onto it

And forgot to put that in my bag

That was my first love letter

Which got washed away in the rain

I feel sorry for the letter

As it had such a terrible fate!

Keyword: My First Love Letter

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Posted by Dirkin 2008-05-08 21:47:07 .... This is a nice story. I dont see any rhyme or structure, it reads more like a short paragraph. What a nice memory to have + Report this comment
Posted by MaddieKnight3 2008-05-09 00:43:23 .... I love this so much. It's so true. It's a little more romantic that you never got to read it 'cause you'll always be thinking about what may have been. I just love this so much. Brilliant work! + Report this comment

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