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Club V (Chapter 2)


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Written by Robbie   
Tuesday, 06 May 2008
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"Holy ****!" Rico called. "We finally got some customers. And one of 'em's hot as hell!"

"Bullshit!" Larry said. "I've been to hell. Ain't nothing hotter than Hell itself."

"Oh, **** off!"

 

Vanessa tensed as Max and her made it to the door.

"I don't like this place," Vanessa said. "Gives me the creeps."

"C'mon!" Max said. "I'm hungry. They say they got great chicken."

"Oh fine, but if it's too weird, I'm leaving."

The couple stepped inside.

They saw a bartender and a guy playing pool in the back.

"Oh, God! It's a damn bar!" Vanessa groaned. "This is a goddamn sports bar!"

"This ain't no sports bar, little girl." a voice said.

Vanessa and Max turned and saw the pool player looking at them.

"Let's go," Vanessa whispered.

"Hey, kid!" the bartender called to Max. "You lookin for a job?"

"No, why?"

"We got an opening. We're desperate. I hate locking up at night, and this place gets way too crowded."

"How much does it pay?" Max asked.

Vanessa elbowed him.

"100 bucks an hour. We go for about ten hours each day. We'll make you a part-timer and make it five hours for you."

"Holy ****!" Max cried. "100 bucks an hour?!?!?! I'm in."

Club V just got a new employee...

 

Rico watched the 2 as they drove off, unbitten.

"Why didn't we just eat em? I'm ****** starved!" Rico complained.

"Because that boy was the chosen one. He is the one that is said to kill the master!"

"Well why didn't we just kill em now?" Rico asked.

"The prophecy states that if the chosen one is killed at night, the master will die too and turn to ash."

"How do we kill him at day? We're ****** vampires you know!"

"Ever heard of hiring help?" Larry asked. "We'll hire a hitman tommorow night. He'll kill the kid at day. Problem solved."

Just then, the door swung open. Larry and Rico looked at the front door.

"Master?" they said in unison.



Copyright 2008 Robbie
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Comments (20)
Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-05-06 19:08:04
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awesome

so now i'm the chosen one? i fuckin rule

no hitman will stop me!

great series i'm anxious for the next chapter
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-05-07 10:01:32
chosen one..

aww damnit, i'm just kidding, now i have to see max make a story about that now based upon him being some allmighty chosen one.

anyhow i am so hooked on this story like i was hooked to World of Warcraft

was / am schemantics schmantics

lol
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-05-07 10:02:51
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I dont have to make a story about it, i'm living it lol
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-05-07 10:53:38
right..

If you’re living it then Vlad is behind me.

OMG HE WAZ THERE RUN!!

=D
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-05-07 11:05:37
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naw this is just a documentary about my life. you see, the hitman they sent is Agent 47, but i kicked his ass. then they tried their luck with Jackie Chan, he wasnt even a challenge! dracula was the hardest, but not imposible.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-05-07 11:27:46
sure...

I would have sent the Spec. Ops team from Rebirth written by Edwin, yeah I went there a supernatural all around ass kicking fighting force team after you no way to survive, unless you use the kid from when the dead walked.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-05-07 11:37:33
well

not You use max, but i use the kid to go after you.
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-05-07 11:40:29
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Umm...okay.

Dont know what your talking about.

Waiting anxiously for the next chapter, robbie!
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-05-07 11:59:21
lol

yeah sometimes i do but othertimes the words just spill out, unfourtnately it happens when i dont have enough surgar in my system.

But none the less i have no clue what my pervious posts were about.

and i cant wait for more of this series.
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-05-07 12:11:27
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this dude has a shit load of comments thanks to us
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-05-07 12:41:55
,,

And now I know, because knowing is half the battle.

uhh, yeah can't wait for the next part.

And when are you going to continue with "The Minority Chapters 20 - ??"
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-05-07 12:44:31
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just take up some more comment space, shall we?

well, ok then

I'm in the process of editing, and rewriting the Minority I'm just gonna post it as the whole story whenever I get done with it.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-05-07 12:50:19
/cackle

Cool, that was a great story.

But on the topic of Robbie, I have been following his writings since I found this site not long ago, and his writing style in the genre of Zombies and Vampires are well I’m not sure how to word this but I enjoy his stories because they are different but not to the point where I am wondering to myself what am I reading, your thoughts?
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-05-07 12:54:25
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Aint my thoughts. I dunno, I've been on this sight since October 4th, of last year. hes been on here since february 2 of this year. I dunno. I've only read This Club V series so far, i think. Might of read anoter story by him cant remember.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-05-07 13:06:33
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Well I would recommend his “When the Dead Walk” series. I’ve read all of the chapters about 4 times.
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