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Club V (Chapter 1)


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Written by Robbie Basse   
Tuesday, 06 May 2008
 

Vanessa Dunlap held two dresses in front of her. One was attractive and revealing, the other was plain and nerdy but okay.

She held the attractive dress in front of her. "Hello, I'm a slut." she said. She tossed that dress aside. She held the plain dress in front of her. "Hi, I'm a fasion don't."

Why the hell am I worrying about this? she wondered. I'm going out with my boyfriend. He won't care what I wear. He'll probably hope I wear nothing.

Finally, Vanessa put on an attractive but not too revealing dress and went to her makeup station, as she called it. She slapped on some earrings. Covered her lips with red lipstick. Put on some eyeliner. Just as she was about to primp her hair, the doorbell rang.

"Oh shit!" Vanessa cried. "It's him!"

Vanessa rushed out of her room and downstairs to the door. She opened it and there stood her boyfriend, Max.

"Nice dress," Max said.

"Nice face," Vanessa said, kissing him. "Bye Mom!"

Vanessa and Max got into Max's Mustang and drove off.

"Where are we going?" Vanessa asked.

"Well, I've heard about this place called Club V. I've heard it's awesome."

"What's the V stand for?" Vanessa asked.

"I dunno. Verticle? I dunno." Max replied.

"Well, have you been there?" Vanessa asked.

"No, but kids say that it's so awesome, people barely come out!"

"Well, what if it's crowded?"

"What's up with all the questions? Just calm down," Max leaned in and kissed her neck. "Everything'll be fine."

The two continued to Club V...

 

"Rico, don't you ever do something else other than play pool?" Larry the bartender asked.

"I believe the correct word is 'Billards.'" Rico corrected.

"Well, I'm pissed." Kevin said. "I haven't had a good meal for ages."

"Hey, you've been living for thousands of years. In that time, you ate a shitload. You need to slim down."

"I'm not going to be blood diet guy!" Kevin said as he walked toward the door.

"Where you going?" Larry asked.

"I dunno. Probably go look for a local blood-drive." Kevin left.

Then a car pulled up outside. Club V had just gotten some new customers...



Copyright 2008 Robbie

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Posted by Zombie Punk
05-06-2008 12:22,
 
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i swear, if you kill me i'm gonna be pissed...lol 
keep 'em coming!
 
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Posted by Zombie Punk
05-06-2008 12:25,
 
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although it might be fun being a vampire...
 
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
05-07-2008 07:57,
 
lol
its like Frosted flakes, more than good their great.
 
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