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Club V (Prologue)


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Written by Robbie   
Monday, 05 May 2008
 

Josh Balcomb, a 25 year old, walked down Linley Avenue, searching for a Strip Bar. He had had no luck all night. Then, he saw the big neon sign that read: CLUB V. He shrugged and guessed there would be a naked woman in there. He walked in. Shit, he thought. Just a shitty bar.

He was about to walk out when a man playing pool stopped him.

"You can't leave." the man said.

"Fuck you, asshole. I can do what I want." Josh protested.

The man hit Josh in the stomach with the Pool Que. Josh flew back, and choked a little.

"What the fuck is your problem?" Josh yelled.

"I'm just thirsty."

"Then get a fuckin beer." Josh stood and backed away.

Suddenly, the man opened his mouth and revealed sharp fangs. Vampire fangs.

"You wanna know what the V stands for?" the man asked, raising Josh off the ground by the neck. "It stands...for Vampire!"

Josh screamed and kicked the man. He fell back, and and ran out of the bar. The man grabbed him just as he was about to cross the street. The man sunk his fangs into Josh's throat, killing him.

The man, who was known as Rico, dragged Josh inside and put him in the back, wondering when Josh would change.

"Jesus, we were almost caught you fucker." the bartender, Larry, said.

"Well shit, what was I supposed to do? Let him run away and tell somebody, then have people with stakes knocking on our door?"

"Well still---"

"He's right, you know." Kevin, another vampire said. "If you were caught, you'd get your ass kicked by...him."

"Well, when Lord Dracula sees the progress in the growing vampire rate, he won't give a damn." Rico said.

"True," Larry said, "but he'd still be pissed."

All 3 heard a knock. The closet door opened and Josh, rubbing the two bite marks on his neck, came out and smiled. "The master will be very pleased when he sees that you 3 have gotten so many new vampires in stock. Soon, the world will be ours for the taking."

"Go in the backroom with the others." Kevin commanded.

"As you wish." Josh smiled, and joined the other people who had walked into Club V, and never came out...



Copyright 2008 Robbie

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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
05-06-2008 09:02,
 
Hooked
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Posted by wbboomer
05-06-2008 11:23,
 
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Wow, that was my plan, Behind the Mask. Hook, line and sinker.
 
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Posted by Zombie Punk
05-06-2008 11:28,
 
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kind of reminded me of FROM DUSK TILL DAWN. you know, that one horror movie where every body at the stip club turns into vampires every night and kills everybody, resulting in more vampires. well, until george clooney and juliet lewis came along that is... 
 
 
awesome story...looking forward for the next chapter. write on!
 
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