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         They bring you your life

         They’ve never sold your soul

         They’ve brought upon you your emotions

         They keep themselves away from whole

         Your half friends and whole enemies

         They gift you with company

         They’ve kept you busy your whole life

         With their cares all so phony

         Is there ever going to be a whole?

         Will you ever be completely in trust?

         Can people be believed?

         We all are just centrist

         I was a seller

         Of my respect

         Now I’m a killer

Keyword: I Can See Clearly

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Posted by Tom Shandruk 2008-05-04 11:02:28 nice This is really nice. For me, the first few lines seemed random, just collections of thoughts. But at the end, they were all wrapped into one package, and I loved it! 5/5 Though, do pick a darker color next time ;) + Report this comment
Posted by Egoist 2008-05-06 17:14:15 .... I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the comment. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-05-06 18:53:00 .... this sort of mistrust of others is usually the result of betrayal of some kind. its nice to think that yes there is someone out there... good poem man + Report this comment
Posted by Egoist 2008-05-07 14:54:18 .... Thanks for the comment, it is nice thinking there is a whole. + Report this comment
Posted by futurewriter 2008-05-11 07:55:45 I Can See Clearly Good thoughts on the interaction of people. We truly never know the other person, do we? People tend to hold at least one aspect of their pysche from others. Nicely written. Good job. Sincerely, IGW + Report this comment
Posted by Egoist 2008-05-14 15:01:32 .... Hey, I haven't heard from you in a long time. I'm glad you liked it, I always noticed weird social standards between certain people, so I made my thoughts into a poem. + Report this comment

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