Why me? Why must it never be me?! (Story of a dreamer/another story in bad grammar)

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James walked down the street with his weeks allowance in hand. He was going to do what he did every week, walk down the street to the book store and buy comic books, graphic novels, and Manga. This was his Saturday richual James loved super hero's, stories of warriors, and every thing inbetween.

Oh how James wanted to be a super hero, how he wanted to feel good, and how he wanted to save people to do good. But that could never happen he was told all the time by bullies,his parents,and teachers that his stories were only fiction for the most part this would stay true.

James got home went to his room and read. He then went into the worlds of Iorn-man,Spiderman,Dragon Ball Z,Naruto,Gundam,X-men,justice league,Batman,and Superman (Those are his fave comix) He loved them all,he could relate to some of them. He could relate to Batman. James's parents were killed when he was a boy, he could relate to Spiderman. James went through alot of bullies and he did love Sience.

As he sat on his bed reading some thing inturped him. Knock on his door his grandparents werent home.

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Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 05-09-2008 17:39,   I know were to go with this story... but I think im gonna drop this series... do yall care?   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...   Posted by Dirkin 05-09-2008 20:57,   ... i dont really know what to say... this seems like the first quarter of an introduction, you have barely established anything with no hint of a story or premise. I can relate to what I know of the character though, maybe you should keep writing if you know where you want to go, then it will be easier to judge   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...   Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 05-10-2008 07:21,   Ok thanks   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...   Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 05-13-2008 14:28,   ... I would like to see you write more. I think this may turn out to be your best.   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...

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