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It starts with a look

The glance from under the lashes

The fire burning in the eyes

It becomes aware with a scent

The sweat of another

The aroma of pulsating pheromones

It continues with a touch

The trail of fingertips on the skin

The softness of lips on lips

It's heightened with a taste

The saltiness of the skin

The mouth of another

It builds with a feeling

The heart beat growing stronger

The tingle in the stomach

It peaks with a sound

The soft sated sighs

The loud energetic shouts

It ends with an awareness

That it takes two to become one

That souls can intertwine

The dancing of lovers

Cannot compare to any other

The rhythm takes control

And I see for a moment

What Heaven truly is

In your arms, forever...1 4 3.

Keyword: The Dance of Lovers

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Posted by ThomasP3 2008-05-02 17:08:18 .... Pretty steamy...a well written poem! + Report this comment
Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-05-04 12:45:38 ,,, nah nah,,you see...man are different,,,we go straight for the dance. Then after the song is over,,we go back to the ball game. Another nice poem from you, but as ive come to expect... the usual. Well done. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-05-07 06:25:40 .... Very nice! Passionate, hot and rhyhmic, the poem is the subject matter. Kudos + Report this comment
Posted by J. Grimm 2008-05-09 13:47:26 JUST US GUYS.... WOW MICHELLE! It seems you have struck a cord with the men because we are the only ones leaving comments on your seductive little ditty. You have a way of attracting the guys with your words. I think the only thing hotter than reading this would be to have you actually whisper it in my ear... PUH-LEEZE WRITE SOME MORE!!! (I swear I'm not creepy!!!!) + Report this comment

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