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When I know that you love me

The sky becomes bluer

The grass becomes greener

The sun becomes brighter

When I know that you love me

The birds sing louder

The flowers bloom bigger

The river runs smoother

When I know that you love me

People are friendlier

Money is unconcerning

All's right in the world

Right now

The grass is green, the sky is blue, the sun is bright, the birds are singing, the flowers are blooming, the river is flowing, and all's right with the world

Beause I know that you love me

And although I know it's true

It's nice to hear it too

Just whisper the words in my ear

My darling, I love you.

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Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-05-01 15:04:29 ,,, What a great poem. Its always nice to hear those three words. Life does feel better when you know you are wanted. Well done michelle. speaking of grass,,,better go cut mine. sometimes poems as simple as this(no disrespect)have the greatest inpact. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-05-01 19:25:18 .... wow that was a nice easygoing piece. now what exactly happens when you don't hear those three impacting words? nothing seems too happy then. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-05-02 07:11:28 .... Pure, simple romantic notions like these are too few these days. Everyone needs someone who makes them feel this way + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-05-02 07:17:24 .... great poem enjoyed it alot + Report this comment
Posted by allmine 2008-05-02 08:06:55 .... You're right Resistance - it's hard to not hear them. But love is more than words it is a feeling, you know? + Report this comment
Posted by nick711 2008-05-05 14:21:58 .... this is brilliant :] + Report this comment
Posted by allmine 2008-05-05 14:28:32 .... Thank you. I don't think I have ever been called brilliant before + Report this comment
Posted by Rowena 2008-05-08 17:43:27 .... Everything does seem so good when you are in love and your poem says it all but can all these really happen. When you want someone to say I love you it takes them ages to say that and sometimes it is just too late and we become the people writing silly romantic stories here .... well done + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-12 10:46:58 .... i remember reading this one before and i really liked it. i still do but still think I Want To Believe is better + Report this comment

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