That Lonely Syllable.

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Written by retrocious.[/sneh]

Wednesday, 30 April 2008

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This innocence is addled,

said he in satisfaction

as he probed, rather aggressively

the girl's sense of sexuality

as she lay there, waxing nostalgic

and rightfully so.

For she found this entire process

of hearts and heated hormones

as unlovely was was implied

by the curtness of that lie

that to her childhood was so sweet

and beautifully so.

That lonely, regal syllable

had been fully steeped in such

soaring, crushing fantasy that she

could not believe it could be

so unfulfillingly quick and yet

heartbreakingly slow.

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Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-04-30 18:27:09 .... liked the setup of this. thought it was interesting. some nice use of words as well. + Report this comment
Posted by nick711 2008-04-30 18:56:36 .... you have complete command of our language. + Report this comment
Posted by CELL 2008-05-01 13:16:05 Wow. Just wow. Powerful. Virtually disturbing BUT, I think this isn't as ugly as it seems. My guess is this is about a woman who wished she didn't have to grow up. Sigh, much like myself; I seriously couldn't have expressed myself better than how you've it done here. Loved it. + Report this comment
Posted by CELL 2008-05-01 13:18:27 .... And actually I believe she's thinking of this while canoodling. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-05-02 18:55:51 .... Its hard to define the moment when we lose that childhood innocence, maybe its the ultimate act of lovemaking, or mayb its never we just suppress it. + Report this comment

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