Smoke, Steel, and Innuendo This story may contain adult content.

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She did not know where she was, it was very dark, and quit cold. She was on her side, looking down at a wall illuminated by a light, the source of which could not be seen. Then he was there. He grabbed her and brought her up. Suddenly he rammed it into her butt, and it locked into place. Then she felt him pull at her back, but he quickly let go. She went forward and felt something move inside her. Next thing she knew, he was sticking his finger through the small cut out hole in her, about to place it on her most sensitive spot. It was at this point that she understood what was going to happen and just could not wait. He pulled, hard. She could feel the great orgasm culminating deep inside. Within, her viscera shifted as something penetrated the intruder, and out flew a chunk of lead, and her back locked in place as the brass flew.

“Very nice. Doesn't kick much. Holds ten rounds. What do you think of her?” the man said

“Looks nice. Let me give it a try.” a younger voice replied.

That little Automag loved going to the range.

Author's Note: I know it was disgusting and all but I just have been trying to think of a way to describe a gun as a woman. And this is it. Thanks for reading. 

Comments (9)

Posted by resistanceisfreedom 04-30-2008 12:14,   ... hmmm yea disgusting is accurate. but i guess this is a way of describing a woman as a gun. and the description was pretty good all disgusting things aside.   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...   Posted by Zombie Punk 04-30-2008 20:52,   umm... okay then...strange but good...   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...   Posted by Xena 05-01-2008 00:00,   hmm just trying to describe a women as a gun ay... riiight   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...   Posted by cookingWine 05-01-2008 06:30,   ... Drawing a line that orgasm and gunshot passes through is a dangerous game. People can make anything be anything else, but sometimes, you should only do it if they have enough in common to begin with.   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...   Posted by CELL 05-01-2008 06:43,   ... A gun is most commonly used  as a phallic symbol... I sort of   have that impregnated in my  mind... it was a good attempt, I'll   give you that.   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...   Posted by Vango 05-01-2008 07:50,   ... Man I got a boner for a gun.   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...   Posted by R.E.Potter 05-01-2008 12:24,   ,,, ah the sensation you get when you get lost in the warmth of a deep barrel... I here you can get grabs if you play with guns. Great idea. Ya know,,truth be told... both, can get you in all heeps of trouble.   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...   Posted by lorislittlesecret 05-01-2008 12:33,   ... So many people commented on this story that I felt the need to read it. Very interesting. Couple of parts (and don't ask me which ones right now, my brain is mush) could have been just a little different in order to keep up the womanly presence. Right now, they're a little awkward.    But good story....   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...   Posted by The_Gimp 05-03-2008 06:56,   ... Hmmm I describe coffee as a woman and you as a gun... Violent man you are 1800! :p   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment... » See all 1 replie(s)

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