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Written by Gryffin   
Tuesday, 29 April 2008

Darkness

 

Sweet Darkness

Let me sink into you,

Blanket me with your shadows.

Save me from the pain,

Let me fall from the light,

And bask in your shade.

Show me love in night,

With sweet, sorrowful black

Beautiful Dreams

Shrouded in hated darkness,

Uncovers true feelings.

Loving Darkness,

Sweep the world to you,

Rock it about in gentle caress,

Swaddle in sweet black.

Lay it to bed under cloudy skies.

Deepest Dark

Let me forget the light,

Allow me to live at your feet

To grow in your shimmering light.

Let me be your counsel,

And judge the misdoings of night.

Please good Darkness,

Let me rule alongside you.



Copyright 2008 Gryffin
Keyword: Darkness
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Comments (3)
Posted by ThomasP3
2008-04-30 04:07:52
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I liked this, but I couldn't say why. I know that sounds idiotic but the flow and words had a great flow to them. It reminded me of a cool cloudy spring day, which are my favorite kind of days; although I don't really know what the true point of the poem was, I liked that it reminded me of that.
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Posted by Gryffin
2008-04-30 10:38:38
I dunno

I honestly don't knwo what the point of this poem is.
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Posted by harmattan
2008-08-30 02:42:35
darkness

YOU don't know what the point is?

Well what chance have we mere mortals.

Get focused!

Okay, I will tell you what it is about. It is about the only person in the world who actually likes power-cuts.

Darkness can be physical, mental, envirnmental, educational, sociological, political......etc

More than half the world lives in darkness of one sort or another, and you not only wish it on people, but you endorse it and want to help impose it.

It used to be called Fascism. It now disguises itself very conveniently behind capitalism.

Just snuggle back under your quilt and hope it never happens to you.

And before you start shouting and cursing, and releasing your silly ninja turtle things, remember that, by your own definition, this comment came from a normal person!

Harmattan
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