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One day there was a murloc who ventured to stormwind to become a great paladin. As time passed he developed love for the humans around him and disdain for the creatures that raised him.

The great leader of the paladins set him on a crusade to eliminate the creatures of the east and return to him when his task is completed. And so he set out on his own crusade against the vile creatures of the east.

As he entered the woods he felt Darkness upon his spirit, like the woods themselves were sucking away his spirit and his will to continue. But he had to complete the task at hand he had to purify the woods of the foul creatures who were seeking not only to devour the land around but everything in their path.

As he ventured deeper and deeper into the woods a horrid stench set upon his nose, it chocked him but he knew if the smell carried by the wind would be this strong what would await him when he got to the horrid creatures that were the host to the vile smell.

As he followed the smell he had to stop several times to vomit, he approached a ridge where the smell seems to be coming from. He noticed that there seemed to be a large gathering of people, as he got closer he seen that only a few were actually alive, and the rest were remnants of the former selves. Their clothing were torn from their bodies, they had bite marks along their skin. It was at that moment when he heard him, their "Leader" spoke to them as if he was speaking to a long lost love of his, his words seemed to relax every muscle in his body he wanted to leap from his spot on the ridge and smite every single "person" who opposed his new found master.

But in his heart he knew what he had to do, he had to slay this "Lich." Before he was able to move ten feet the previous docile "creatures" were staring at him with their arms raised and mouths opened letting out a bone chilling moan, but none moved in for the attack, as he calmed himself, a voice came into his head. Do not fear me paladin, for I know what you want, it is not fame, nor is it glory, but it is the respect of those around you, young murloc come with me and I will give you everything you have ever dreamed for. Yes I know you are a murloc, I do not need you to take your helmet off, I will give you a better one, you will be the general of my armies you alone will command what you see here, all I ask is that you come with me. Give your heart to the darkness within; get vengeance on those who have wronged you those who shunned you when you were only asking to help them.

In his heart he felt the light fade away and the darkness set in, he knew what he had to do with his new found "Master" he would take vengeance on all those who have wronged him, the city of Stormwind will fall by his hand and there will be nothing to stop him. Little did he know there was an agent of SI:7 on the same case, he sent his falcon with a coded letter to Mathis Shaw letting him know of the problem. Just moments his falcon left his side, the agent was captured and killed but the once paladin.

Keyword: WoW murloc

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Posted by Behind_the_Mask 2008-04-29 09:11:04 blah Before anyone says it I know the beginning is a bit weak I wrote it in Chat while playing World of Warcraft. I hope you enjoy it my first “Story I have shared with anybody.” + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-05-07 13:34:38 cool Interesting. HAs a lot of protential for a great saga. Does this story has something to do with World of Warcraft? never played it myself but after reading this i definetly would like to try it out. I like stories like these. Kind of reminded me of the dark tower series and the lord of the rings. Bring on the next one! + Report this comment
Posted by Behind_the_Mask 2008-05-07 14:54:19 thanks Yeah it is based loosely off of world of warcraft, thanks for the comments, I have the characters made up for the beginning parts of the story, working on the actual story is taking a bit longer than expected. + Report this comment
Posted by philneale1952 2008-05-08 12:43:54 Persevere Geeat start, and I agree it sounds like the beginning of a saga, the kind of Norse ones my daughter keeps telling me about (she's ONLY 25). Don't worry about sharing, it's the effort that's important. You said you wanted more "Marks" stories; I had no idea where the trilogy was going when 'A Sectret Life' started to take shape, but pretty soon the story led ME to its conclusion. You can't force them, let them show you the way........................... + Report this comment
Posted by Behind_the_Mask 2008-05-08 12:58:48 thanks I have to say thank you for your comments, and you are correct in the fact that they can’t be forced. Well not more of the “Mark” stories but more of your work in general, it was the “Mark” stories that got me hooked. + Report this comment

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