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Freak


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Written by Gryffin   
Monday, 28 April 2008

Freak

 

I’m different

Not really like anyone

And it labels me

 

Am I really a freak?

That different that I’m shunned

So that I don’t fit in?

 

So I’m not a clone

That means I’m hated,

Shunned, and ridiculed?

 

I’m not a freak

I’m just me

Some everyone will understand.



Copyright 2008 Gryffin
Keyword: Freak
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Comments (6)
Posted by lorislittlesecret
2008-04-28 12:40:55
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In that case, we are all freaks cause we are all different....different is good. It's what separates us from each other...
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Posted by jt conner
2008-04-28 13:59:53
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Seems to send the right message. We could all relate I am sure.
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-04-28 14:07:31
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Im a freak...im super fre-kay....good poem.
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Posted by nick711
2008-04-28 14:25:21
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at the end is it

Some DAY everyone will understand?

just wondering. it was very good, the same set-up as Slave. i think it should be a little longer, didn't give me a chance to really fall into the poem.
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-04-28 16:11:44
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it conveyed it's message well. i sure as hell never want to be a clone.
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Posted by ThomasP3
2008-04-28 17:14:31
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Rejoice in your freakdom! Some of the greatest people known to the world may be considered freaks.
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