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Passing A Test

You tell me that you love me,

But we both know that’s a lie.

Do you push my hopes up just to see me cry?

Part of me wanted you back

Yet another part wanted you dead

For being with her

To put a bullet in your head.

I’ve changed a lot since then

And I’m a better person

Two wrongs don’t make a right.

I’m no longer that immature.

I’m sad to see you go,

But it’s for the best

Life’s sent me on a journey

And I didn’t fail it’s test.

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Posted by jt conner 2008-04-28 14:02:39 .... Like I have said before-this is something that we all can relate to. + Report this comment
Posted by ThomasP3 2008-04-28 17:11:49 .... I thought this was very good. Great explanation of 2 sides of an emotion. Only a suggetion, the only line I may have edited is :" Life’s sent me on a journey." It's a bit over used as far as themes go. Again, just an opinion from someone who knows little about the mechanics of poetry. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-04-29 15:18:57 .... wow truly an incredible piece! definitely going to my faves. + Report this comment

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