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Free From These Chains.

I know what I did was wrong,

And there was no reason for it.

But I’m glad I did it.

I killed the chains that held me,

I was longing to be free

So I made my escape

I’m almost free,

I’ll break my new chains

I need freedom

One day I’ll be free

No more chains

Just me.

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Posted by jt conner 2008-04-28 14:05:52 .... I would suggest more creativity and use of devotion to what you are trying to get this to say. + Report this comment
Posted by nick711 2008-04-28 14:26:36 .... it was difficult to understand. i wished you would have elaborated on it a little bit more. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-04-28 16:09:34 .... i agree i think you could have went a little deeper into this. but i still thought it was good. was this the slave finally getting freedom? + Report this comment
Posted by LittleCelticFairy1992 2008-05-05 04:22:13 .... I like it myself. It shows emotion I think. Only thing the line "I’ll break my new chains" I didn't quite get it at first. Because it goes from you escaped till you were captured it seems like. anyway I do like it, you did a good job for a poem Tyffn. -Fairy + Report this comment

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