My Present

I wrote this poem and had RE Potter look it over. ...

The Peacock Case

When the train doors opened, a blast of sticky air...

Cut and Rot


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Written by August Blackwood   
Monday, 28 April 2008

He lives

And he eats.

But it is only I

Who knows

Of his

Secret death.

I watch his every move

And de-code his vibrant smile.

His farewell signs are

In his every stir and budge.

I look into his eyes

And their brown color are illusions

Over the gray underneath.

His soul has cracks

And most of the chips

Have fallen away.

My friends all attack

Him with words that stab.

He is a strong man, they say, nothing can cut his bones.

He's our buddy, he'll take everything and leave

Us cured.

But I see his invisible tears

Trickle down his smile,

Where they sink into his burnt lips.

I just want to make my friends' words

Material

And slash them to pieces of gory, pulsing flesh.

But I resist the urge

And keep on smiling.

They're the same age as me.

They're too young to die.

But...

Just today,

I brushed

My hair before

My old mirror.

And

I found my first

Gray strand.

I tried to pull it out,

ANd once I did,

I noticed...

It was brown

Again.

To my surprise,

I looked up to see

My ribs exposed.

My flesh falling in stinking chunks of meat.

I touched it,

But I found my skin instead.

I saw the frowning muscles

Behind my painful smile.

My burning

Smile:

I watched it peel away.



Copyright 2008 August Blackwood
Keyword: Cut and Rot
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Comments (2)
Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-04-28 15:49:49
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very interesting poem. thought it was good.
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Posted by nick711
2008-05-13 15:53:57
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beautiful.
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