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Written by Shawn Dally   
Friday, 25 April 2008
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Your blood boils

Your heart is pounding

Sirens in you head sounding

Like a snake you body coils

You get tense

You get a rush

Your head's about to bust

Your hands clench

You start to sweat

You feel heat

Your body feels weak

You become a nervous wreck

You want to crawl in a hole

You get wicked thoughts

You get mad adrenaline shots

Your heart feels cold

It takes you back

It takes you to a bad place

All of the sudden you don't have the same face

You just want to attack

It's not fear that grips you

But an ever-burning rage

It's not running that compels you

But to be let out of you cage

It's not dread that calls you

But to succumb to your hate

It's not crying that rings you

But your sanity to break

This is how you feel

Feel when you are threatened



Copyright 2008 Shawn Dally
Keyword: Threatened
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Posted by 20CARMEN_NiCOLE11
2008-04-25 20:50:34
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wow you're a awesome writer

i like how it flows so well and you never use punctation

nice job
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-04-25 21:16:38
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best description of being threatened i have ever read. well conveyed.
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Posted by 1800
2008-04-25 21:32:07
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Yes. That describes me perfectly.
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