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Unstable

And apparently you do not see what I can see

You can't see the clown in the mirror staring back at me

You can't see these marks on my skin

You can't see all of our memories I still hide within

You can't see my barrier has broken down

You can't see my struggle to turn everything around

But I can see your face, it obstructs my view

Regret still rules my day along with all that I have done to you

I think maybe it's me with all of the impurities

It's me who is lost without a shred of authority

Thinking too highly of myself

I've been told is something I do quite well

Always thinking I deserved so much more

Than everything she accounted for

Or maybe this is just my thinking for the day

Maybe it really is you who brought all of this decay

Yout took my morals and buried them in the floor

I can't even decide what is right and what is wrong anymore

Everyday I'm becoming more unstable

Fading away, unable to find my savior

Keyword: Unstable

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Posted by 20CARMEN_NiCOLE11 2008-04-25 18:41:15 .... i like this poem. you accidently misspelled you. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-04-25 20:33:06 .... oh haha i see that. wow how clumsy of me. didn't even notice that. forgive me though but i'm too lazy to go and fix it. but anyway thanks for the comment. always appreciated. and thanks for being so observant as well. + Report this comment
Posted by lobiva nadha 2008-04-27 01:50:44 o,,,hhehee I was so lost into it,, that only when I read the comments did I notice that "yout" ,, Nice one , I liked it + Report this comment
Posted by Xena 2008-04-27 02:11:11 yea no problem restsotefreedom.. its okay... 'you' is a pretty hard word to spell.. its got like silent syllables and other... syllables in it... that are.. hard to spell.. i.. guess... + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-04-27 13:13:44 .... so uh Xena or whatever the fuck your name is. you have some kind of problem with me or what? everytime you leave a comment on my pieces it's either negative or just plain stupid. i don't know what your fucking problem is but i'd appreciate it if you'd just stop commenting me all together. it would be such a nice feeling to never have to see your comment again. thanks! + Report this comment
Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-04-27 13:26:03 ,,, Not sure why xena has a hair up her ass for ya... thought this was good. I have come to know your style of writing... and appreciate your views. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-04-27 13:28:41 .... thank you Potter. i appreciate that. i like critisism and all but she has just got it out for me for some unknown reason and if she has a problem she could to me about it instead of taking it out on my poetry. + Report this comment
Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-04-27 13:38:37 ,,, she seems to have a problem with a lot of us. I have posted my request to the admin to retract her messages that are pointless and have derogatory tones. But what can really be done to assholes like that. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-05-31 00:01:51 .... hmmm so it isn't just me she leaves pointless comments with. well i'm glad you took action but i took a bit of action of my own. i just basically told her to stop commenting me because her comments were useless and ever since then i haven't heard from her. + Report this comment

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