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NOTHiNG SEEMS TO WORK

SO WHY DO i EVEN TRY

iT SEEMS SO STUPiD TO WORRY

ABOUT THiNGS i FEEL iNSiDE

NO ONE KNOWS ONLY ME

BUT iT FEELS LiKE EVERYBODY KEEPS STARiNG

i WONDER iF THEY KNEW WOULD THEY UNDERSTAND

PROBABLY NOT THAT'S WHY iT'S LOCKED DEEP iNSiDE

Keyword: SECRET

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Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-04-23 20:13:11 .... i like your short poems. they are very effective. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-04-23 22:17:07 .... I think you go straight to the heart of the subject of your poems, which is good, a pure feeling captured without being too "abstract" for poetic effect + Report this comment
Posted by ThomasP3 2008-04-24 03:56:20 .... I liked this one. Everyone can relate the the discomfort of having the feeling of people staring. + Report this comment
Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-04-24 06:37:45 .... Shhhhh....great poem...is the backwards capitalization an accident or on purpose? + Report this comment
Posted by 20CARMEN_NiCOLE11 2008-04-24 10:59:58 .... O. i DO iT ON PURPOSE + Report this comment
Posted by 1800 2008-04-25 13:48:52 .... For some reason I believe this poem can apply to me and my opinions on high school. + Report this comment
Posted by gsaracen 2008-04-26 01:51:44 .... nobody really knows us do they? We've got secrets. Some big. I keep a few big ones from my fam. IT does feel a bit weird .... guess that's what this poem is about. locking it in inside. + Report this comment
Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 2008-06-11 08:20:25 .... I can relate to this. Well done! + Report this comment

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