Share it:

YOUR LOVE AT FiRST WAS JUST FUN

WE KiSSED AND LAUGHED LiKE FRiENDS

AND DiDNT TAKE NOTHiNG SERiOUS 

THEN YOUR LOVE BECAME DEEPER

i THOUGHT WE WOULD BE PERFECT

AND YOU WAS A KEEPER

YOU WAS THE LOVE OF MY LiFE

i JUST HADNT REALiZED iT

YOU MADE ME MAD BUT i DiDNT TELL

AND i DONT KNOW WHY

i GUESSED CAUSE i DiDNT WANT TO MESS UP

THE BEST PART OF MY LiFE

WE DiFTED APART

AND i GOT MAD

i TRiED TO CALL

BUT NO ANSWER

iT ALL SEEMED TO BE CRASHiN DOWN

i KNEW iT WOULDNT LAST

AND i REALLY DiDNT CARE

i JUST THREW YOU OUT LiKE YESTERDAY'S NEWS

AS SOON AS i DiD

i REALiZED HOW MUCH i LOVED YOU

AND i STiLL DO

BUT iM TOO SCARED TO TELL YOU

i JUST WiSH YOU KNEW

Keyword: LOVE TRUTH MESSED UP

Report this story | Add to Favorites | Send to Friends | Author's Profile

No Comments posted

Comments (9)

Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-04-23 20:11:26 .... sad. i think we all at some point reflect back on our past actions. and then we try to make everything whole again. but sometimes there just is no fixing what's already broken. good poem. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-04-23 22:21:22 .... I'd love it if everyone just came out and said what they needed to say. I guess thats what poetry is all about. Nice job + Report this comment
Posted by ThomasP3 2008-04-24 03:54:24 .... Very good poem. The first stanza may have lost its flow for me, and had gotten me confused. But I liked it. + Report this comment
Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-04-24 06:38:46 .... This was a great one and reminds me a lot of things that I feel... + Report this comment
Posted by Roadkill315 2008-04-24 13:54:47 .... Sounds like opportunity lost, nice work conveying the thought + Report this comment
Posted by 1800 2008-04-25 13:47:31 .... Love is one of those things that teens should not really mess with. I know I don't. Still, good job. + Report this comment
Posted by ShawnD 2008-04-25 21:17:01 .... that was excellent + Report this comment
Posted by gsaracen 2008-04-26 01:49:00 great how you use colloquial and slang type language in it! + Report this comment
Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 2008-06-11 08:11:05 .... I agree with 1800 that love is a thing teenagers need stay well away from. I hate how this generation tosses the word 'love' around. They do not mean it. Love is a complicated thing that really no one can understand and is definitely not a toy. Okay, I'll get off of my soap box now. :) You're poem was very nice. I liked it. The only thing I saw was a few grammatical type errors. + Report this comment

Post a comment

Post a comment