The Gift - Awakening

The night was no different than any other dark or...

Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise

Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise ...

From A Noose She Hangs


User Rating: / 5
PoorBest 
Written by Sorrow Is My Mask   
Wednesday, 23 April 2008

 

From A Noose She Hangs

 

She feels so weary

Her purpose she can't find, an endless theory

 

All her life she's tried to hide

All of the torment her past keeps bottled up inside

 

Her eyes, they are made of glass now

Her tears, they have no where to run out

 

She's come to find noone understands her

Everybody pushes her down into disaster

 

Her body shows how many times it's been used

Her skin, so scratched and bruised

 

As for him, she convinces herself his heart she didn't break

It's not her fault he feels so out of place

 

But her own corruption, she knows is all her fault

So tired of pushing away every incomplete thought

 

But tonight she has fixed all of those things

Hanging from her hand made noose

Hoping to get her set of wings



Copyright 2008 Sorrow Is My Mask
No Comments posted
Comments (6)
Posted by ThomasP3
2008-04-23 16:56:11
....

Sad, but good.
+ Report this comment
Posted by 20CARMEN_NiCOLE11
2008-04-23 17:12:53
....

THATS GOOD.

AND SAD.

BUT i LiKE iT.
+ Report this comment

Posted by Vango
2008-04-23 18:30:56
....

Very good and at the same time very sad.
+ Report this comment
Posted by Xena
2008-04-24 19:57:27
noose

rymes with goose
+ Report this comment
Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-04-27 13:23:10
,,,

I just love this title. Thought it was a great piece as well.
+ Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-06-26 21:15:09
....

The title was very interesting and your poem was sad and well written. Great job!
+ Report this comment
 
< Prev   Next >

Remove Ads