Posted by ThomasP3
2008-04-23 16:58:24
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Simple but understood. The last line might have been broken up into two, break after God.
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Posted by 20CARMEN_NiCOLE11
2008-04-23 17:07:12
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OK THANKS.
i'LL FiX iT.
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-04-23 18:37:50
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Don't we all. Liked it.
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Posted by 1800
2008-04-23 18:58:58
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Aren't we all?
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-04-23 20:08:07
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hmmm. i wasn't expecting this to be so short but i have to say i really liked this. great job!
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-04-23 22:19:16
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Short, kind of like a message you might read on a fridge magnet, that we all relate to.
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Posted by gsaracen
2008-04-26 01:47:23
I would
pray to God. but am not sure he's listenin!
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Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery
2008-06-11 08:24:22
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I liked this one, as well! Great job.
Though, I feel the need to reply to gsaracen. God always listening, but his answer does not come immediately and it may not always be what you want. Or, maybe it is you who are not listening. I have found myself guilty of that very thing. I pray and then go about my daily business and never open my ears for the answer.
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-07 22:32:44
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i usually dont like religious stuff but this wasnt really religious, just last couple lines. It was unexpectivly short but nonetheless the poem was well written. great work.
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