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iS iT LOVE?

WELL WHEN HE WALKS iNTO THE ROOM DOES YOUR HEART START TO BEAT FAST?

DO MEMORiES POP UP iN YOUR HEAD ABOUT YOU AND HiM FROM THE PAST?

NO MATTER HOW MAD OR SAD YOU ARE WHEN YOU HEAR HiS VOiCE YOU SMiLE?

DO YOU HOPE AND PRAY HE'LL BE YOURS FOR AWHiLE?

DO YOU JUST WANT TO TELL HiM YOU LOVE HiM BUT iT'S TOO HARD AND YOU DON'T KNOW WHY?

ARE YOU SO CONFUSED WAY DOWN DEEP iNSiDE?

YOU THiNK HE LiKES YOU BUT YOU'RE NOT FOR SURE.

YOU JUST WANT TO KNOW HOW HE FEELS BEFORE YOU TELL HiM YOU LOVE HiM.

YES, MY FRIEND THiS iS LOVE!

BUT YOU CAN'T WAiT FOREVER TO TELL HiM.

HE MiGHT BE SHY YOU NEVER KNOW OR HE MiGHT FEEL THE SAME WAY.

HOPEiNG AND PRAYiNG YOU'LL TELL HiM HOW YOU FEEL FiRST.

WELL GET TOGETHER JUST YOU TWO AND THEN YOU MAKE YOUR MOVE.

ASK HiM HOW HE FEELS AND i'M SURE HE WON'T LiE TO YOU.

Keyword: LOVE CONFUSED BRAVE

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Posted by 20CARMEN_NiCOLE11 2008-04-23 15:31:59 :D OK THiS WAS MY FiRST POEM AND i WROTE iT LiKE FOUR YEARS AGO SO iTS NOT PERFECT BUT i STiLL LOVE iT. + Report this comment
Posted by Vango 2008-04-23 16:46:47 .... I think it's really good. Keep writing. + Report this comment
Posted by ThomasP3 2008-04-23 17:02:02 .... I liked this, so does my wife, she is sitting next to me! lol...a nice poem on a happy topic. Finally, no sadness in a poem!! + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-04-23 20:06:14 .... yea. i'm so used to reading sad pieces. but the happiness was a nice surprise. i think it also does a good job of sending a message. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-04-23 22:14:30 .... This is very nice. Why do people always wait to tell the other person how they feel? Life is full of regrets. Hey why do you type in CAPS? It is a little strange, but I guess its kind of a style? + Report this comment
Posted by CELL 2008-04-24 08:06:47 .... There are just a couple of errors, like: "DOES MEMORiES POP UP iN YOUR HEAD..." It's supposed to be, "DO memories pop up in your head..." But eh. This is overall, cute and encouraging^^. + Report this comment
Posted by 20CARMEN_NiCOLE11 2008-04-24 11:01:48 .... OK THANKS. GOSH THiS PLACE iS THE BEST:D + Report this comment
Posted by The_Gimp 2008-04-24 18:17:34 ... Not bad, not my kind of poetry since I think that french is more proper and beautiful to hear than english but overall you did a great job :) Keep it up! PS: CAPS ARE FOR SHOUTING ON THE INTERNET, Cheers! ;) + Report this comment
Posted by 1800 2008-04-25 13:45:30 .... I am no doctor or psychologist, but I am quite sure those are suffering from a syndrome called love, my dear. Like how it rhymes. + Report this comment
Posted by ShawnD 2008-04-25 21:07:57 .... that was good I can relate to a real life experience with this one girl + Report this comment
Posted by gsaracen 2008-04-26 01:44:23 .... it's upbeat! I like it! + Report this comment

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