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COME INTO MY ARMS - The Arrival, Chapter 1

Sophia saw the new arrival from her bedroom...


routine


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Written by joyjoy   
Wednesday, 23 April 2008
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she was staring into space that night. she wasn't really thinking about anything, then suddenly she felt her heart skip a beat.she closed her eyes and waited if she could feel it again.

'no, maybe some other time..' she said to herself.

waking up she, glanced at her mobile to see if there were any messages.she used wake up having a good morning message to start her day, but there weren't any today. not from him at the very least.

'no breakfasts for today.' she decided, like how she decides every morning.

working her way through the day was hard. she had to keep herself busy or else she'll be stuck with day dreaming.

'i'm facing the direction where you are..at least it will keep me from thinking we're far apart..' were the words she suddenly thought of while staring at some paper she was trying to read.

'what's the matter with me?' she asked herself. she tried forgetting the answer to that question because she already knew what was wrong.

dinner came and she was sitting all by her lonesome. 'it'll be better tomorrow.' she reminded herself..

'i guess you know what's gonna happen now.' were the last words she heard him say, then she woke up. it was still dark and she found herself staring into space yet again. she wasn't really thinking about anything, then suddenly she felt her heart ache a little. she closed her eyes and waited till it was gone.. but it didn't.

'no, maybe some other time..' she said to herself.



Copyright 2008 joyjoy
Keyword: routine
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Comments (3)
Posted by ThomasP3
2008-04-23 17:07:08
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Sorry, didn't understand this. Some of the sentences ran on and lost me. Maybe an edit for grammatical errors would help, for example, this is one of the sentences that lost me: "she used wake up having a good morning message to start her day, but there weren't any today. not from him at the very least."
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Posted by AuThEnTiC
2008-04-25 20:18:18
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I liked it...!!! for some reason hit close to home... I think it has potential to be an awesome story.. Or its great the way it is either way you cant go wrong..!!
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Posted by Xena
2008-04-27 02:24:57
huhh...

so.. after reading this i have a strong hunger for a peanut butter jelly... telegram.. what.. whats this.. oh.. it says... i have no idea... what i have just... read..
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