A girl named Jill was out with her boyfriend Toby riding on  a           motorcycle. Jill: "Toby slow down your scaring me!!" Toby:"Only if you give me a hug." So Jill gave him a big hug and said "Now slow down." Toby:"Now tell me you love me." Jill said "I love you!" Toby said" Only one more thing take my helmet off and put it on you its been bothering me." So Jill put the helmet on her the next day a story in the paper said "Crash into a Building 2 people 1 survivor" Toby had died truth is he new his breaks wouldnt work halfway down the road. He`d rather die and have one last hug and i love you from the one he loved.

Keyword: The Death For Love

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Posted by ThomasP3 2008-04-23 04:08:21 .... I liked this, very sad, but alot said in a little space. + Report this comment
Posted by Roadkill315 2008-04-23 09:33:52 .... More a framework for a story perhaps? If not, too short and fragmented to be considered good work. Build it into a short story of 300-600 words and I bet you'll have a hit. + Report this comment
Posted by citygurl895 2008-04-23 19:09:12 thank u thank u i love writing storys i wrote another one today called friends till the end im bout to write another one true + Report this comment

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