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Written by rachael   
Monday, 21 April 2008
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I sit here watching you,

You shine that beautiful smile of yours.

No one could resist it.

You take a sip of your morning coffee,

Letting out a small chuckle.

I was wrong to let you go.

You don’t even know that I’m watching you.

You don’t understand how hard it is,

The other woman prettier and younger than me.

I could do the same,

I can find a younger man.

But no one compares to you.

I miss you my love.

My memory of you will linger for always,

Haunting me in my dreams.

How could I have let you go?

 

this is just something random i wrote...me an my sis were playing a game. its kinda like an experimental poem.



Copyright 2008 rachael
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Posted by rareflower
2008-04-21 21:54:20
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omg *tear* that was so beautiful..
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Posted by Vango
2008-04-22 09:55:28
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This was very good.
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Posted by Roadkill315
2008-04-22 12:45:51
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Memories are powerful, and they can haunt. Nice work expressing that
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-04-22 13:14:33
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Sound like a personal problem..kidding,,,nice heartfelt poem.
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Posted by deadfamilytree
2008-04-22 21:52:33
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lol coz i stlk ppl for a livin...especially ex's
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