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The Die Is Cast, Chapter 1


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Written by Gwyn   
Monday, 21 April 2008
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Amelia was an active child, a wonderful sibling and a helpful daughter, but one day her whole word changed when she was kidnapped and never heard from again.

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Why me? Why does everything horrible always happen to me?

Amelia's thoughts were cut short by a shooting pain at her wrists and ankles. She was blindfolded, lonely and hurt. Two days ago she was happy and in comfort. Two days ago she was kidnapped and all happiness ended.

The young girl lay in the back of a moving truck, which had been on the move for the last two days. Only stopping to give the girl food and water. At least they were not starving her. So, if they weren't going to abuse her, what were they doing? The mystery remained unsolved.

Suddenly, the truck screeched to a halt. Both doors opened and two men stepped from inside the truck. They walked around the back to retrieve the girl. Picking her up, one of them walked up to the house they had stopped in front of. Once up the stairs and onto the second floor he opened a bedroom door, cut her bonds, untied her blindfold and left her lying on the bed.

Tears streaming down her face, Amelia asked again, "Why me?"



Copyright 2008 Gwyn
Keyword: kidnap die dice
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Comments (8)
Posted by ThomasP3
2008-04-22 06:48:13
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Good description, however not quite sure where this is going. It seemed as if this was only the middle of a story without the beginning or an end. I'd love to see it expanded maybe?
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Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10
2008-04-22 07:52:40
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I like it.
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Posted by E.Dover
2008-04-22 08:31:00
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Thomas, of course it doesn't make much sense yet, it's part one. So of course it's going to be expanded, lol.
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Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery
2008-04-22 13:15:09
Explanation!

Yes, this is going to be expanded on. This was only the first part. There is more coming.
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Posted by Egoist
2008-05-10 12:33:22
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It leaves me pondering. That is pretty odd that they didn't abuse her, and actually gave her, her own room with a bed...Interesting.
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Posted by nick711
2008-05-11 19:42:47
love the mystery

hmm..room with a bed? or...all you can rape buffet? lets move on to the next chapter to find out...
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Posted by cookingWine
2008-05-11 19:50:38
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All you can rape buffet.

That is the single most inappropriate thing I've ever heard.
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-05-12 17:33:31
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for once i painfully agree with cookingwine. that is the most disgusting and just plain wrong phrase i've ever heard as well. but eh anyway yea this has me wanting more. so on to the next!
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