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Ah Mr.Silver a complex man funny at times serious at others. He's been working at the "Grand Carlo  Towers" for 8 years now he's seen people come and go, He's seen people exploded,imploded,deploded  all that Jazz. But what takes his time up and what hes loves is taking out blood clan members (Its what keeps him sane!)

 "Ah! hears comes one now" said Mr.Silver. The Grand Carlo Towers is where most of the Blood clan members stayed and had meetings "SILVER!!!!" yelled Mr.Patts the hotel manger "Takes this nice mans bags to his room now." Mr.Silver grabbed his bags "Yes master as you wish" said Silver

A few moments later he was to the man's room "Your room Sir" said Silver "Thank you young man" Mr.Silver saw the pamplet in his hand the blood clan member was here for the Oprea concert featuring vet rapper turned Oprea singer Jazz~boi~ganasta mak known now as GIL Mr.Silver would handle him yet

 Its was the night of the concert and the blood clan member was in hist seat. And Mr.Silver was on the staff balconey ready watching, the concert was starting thw singing started it was time Mr.Silver got out his energy knife it could cut anything. (:P) the blood clan member was right under a big shandiler Silver thows the knife. SHING!!! it cut the chain of the shandiler it fell crushing the blood clan member.

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Posted by Vango 2008-04-22 09:45:41 .... Short and short. + Report this comment
Posted by CELL 2008-04-22 14:18:08 Spasm. There's certainly loads of bad grammar in this. + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-04-22 16:09:34 Grammaer Yes, yes there is + Report this comment
Posted by E.Dover 2008-04-22 17:14:15 .... Haha, funny. I like the "He's seen people exploded,imploded,deploded all that Jazz." LOL + Report this comment
Posted by Vango 2008-04-22 18:15:17 .... I love your style. Great use of grammar. + Report this comment
Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 2008-04-22 18:23:28 .... You have improved greatly since the first few you told me to read. Keep it up! + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-04-22 18:59:09 :) Yay!!! + Report this comment
Posted by novel.idea 2008-07-07 17:57:22 .... How does Mr. Silver know who the Blood Clan members are? And why doesn't Mr. Patts fire Silver for killing all his customers? + Report this comment

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