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She's the girl of my dreams,

We'd make a good team.

I love her so much,

I clam up to her touch.

We're meant to be together,

I will never forget her...never.

Wish she was mine,

But our friendship's on the line.

Without her I'm not whole,

She's like half of my soul.

She's everything I've ever dreamed of,

I know it must be love.

Does she like me back?

Is there something that I lack?

She reads me like a book,

It's my heart that she took.

I really love that girl,

Soon our love will unfurl.

The End

Author's Note: This is really going on in my life. This is true and sincere. Just wanted to put that out there.

Keyword: The Girl I Love

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Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-04-17 18:21:32 .... great poem. i could tell this was sincere even without the note at the bottom. nice read. + Report this comment
Posted by nishant1500 2008-04-17 23:34:07 .... Nice, 4/5 Nothing different frm. other Love poems. + Report this comment
Posted by Egoist 2008-05-03 15:19:08 .... So did it work? Are you with her now? If you read this to her, it should work. It is very sincere, and with a heart and hope like this, don't screw up. + Report this comment
Posted by wbboomer 2008-05-10 18:21:00 Well Egoist, It's already screwed up. A couple months ago she moved to friggen Kentucky and left me to rot in Michigan. Why me? The girl of my dreams is another damn state! Damn it! Again, why me? + Report this comment

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