I wrote this in one hour.

I wanted to ask my fellow writers - how much time does it take them to write a short poem?
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But other than that, your poem was great. the happiness was shown through how it would be spoken or just the events taking place. The poem reminds me of a quote, "If you think sunshine is happiness, then you've never danced in the rain."
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its an extremely cheerful poem. i felt like dancing in the rain.

by the way, it doesn't matter what length of time went into composing a literary piece of art. what matters is how long it stays with the readers.

good work. lol. ;-)
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I generally can write a rhyming Poem in about five to ten minutes.

Those are the easy ones.

Now free verse I struggle a bit with because there are juss too many variables and I am constantly nit picking at them until I either ruin me verse and scrap it or work at it juss long enough, about twenty to thirty minutes until I happy.

Now me free verses go fer a spell, it like without the lyrical beats I have a hard time realizing when it is complete because I somewhat abstract Poet fer most part so without the structured rhymes a lot of times I need feel whole after I do with me rhymes.

I hope yer continue writing Poetry, this pretty cool here.

Keep well,

'Anna
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