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Be mine.

We both know

whats best for the

future.

Bound together.

Like stitches on

a quilt, with a steel

suture. 

My grasp

tightens around your

arm, never letting go.

Never.

We will 

be together

for ever and ever and

ever. 

Keyword: ever and ever future suture never poetry nate stanford

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Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-04-16 16:45:29 .... this sounds more like forcing the togetherness. but well written. + Report this comment
Posted by nick711 2008-04-16 19:37:59 .... thats what i was going for. kind of creepy effect, + Report this comment
Posted by Egoist 2008-05-10 12:47:19 .... It does seem forcing. At first I thought it was just a man pronouncing his love to a girl, but the last line really adds the effect. Well written for the emotion you desired. + Report this comment

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