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You Create

My dear old friend

What happened to you in the end

You're not the same

You treat her like she's only a game

I know deep inside you have a heart

Don't let this tear you apart

She's waiting for you

She's endlessly waiting for you, turning blue

I hate to see you treat her this way

Open your eyes, throw the drugs away

Can't you see what it does to you

Can't you see what it puts us through

This torment you learn to bear

Uses up the last bit of our care

She's getting tired of trying to save

What you incoherently lay to waste

And I myself, realize you are too much to take

Perhaps, you can never get out of the hell you create

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Posted by ThomasP3 2008-04-16 03:55:56 .... Sadly, a plague with no solution in sight. Well spoken Sorrow. + Report this comment
Posted by CELL 2008-04-24 08:51:32 .... The speaker came off as the subject's father, and the woman he mentioned, at first I thought was the drug addicts girlfriend/wife, but after reading the entire poem I think it's his mother. So, sounds like a couple of parents struggling with their kid (whom has probably over dosed on drugs a couple of times). "You Create" is an excellent title; this kid is surrounded by a family that must love him (as their concern and attempts to aid him prove) but his mind is probably distorting that (or he simply cannot perceive it) so he's chosen the path of self-destructive sedatives, drastically changing what will become of him and the people surrounding him... that's just what I saw though^^ Very good (once again). On to another! + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-04-24 11:55:33 .... hmmm well i can see how you drew that conclusion. but actually this isn't about parents. this is about a friend of mine who is ruining his relationship with his girlfriend. and she turns to me for help and i try as best i can to get him to see what he is doing but sometimes it seems like there really is no pulling him out. so that's what this is about. still enjoyed your comment though. + Report this comment
Posted by CELL 2008-04-25 17:56:00 .... Ah, crud, I was going to go with that, but I second thought it. I was close though^^, keep up the good work! + Report this comment

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