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Tasha At Talon's Nook -- The Conclusion


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Written by JS Brown   
Monday, 14 April 2008
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Buddy leapt to his feet, throwing his arms around Tasha’s neck.  “You’re alive!” he exclaimed with glee, laughing. “I thought you were dead!”

Tasha, somewhat taken aback by his exuberance, could only grin as she returned his hug. “Well... I could say the same to you.”

Buddy let go of her and backed off a step. “Hey, that’s right.” he said, his hand going to where the arrows had penetrated his chest. He blanched, finding bloody holes in his tunic and elven cloak. “Hey!” He looked at her in confusion, his mouth hanging open in bewilderment.

“It’s okay. Yes, you were dead. Both of us were.” She said, which apparently did nothing to alleviate his dilemma, for he simply continued to stare at her, slack-jawed. She let it go, then stepped out of the way so that he could see Drac.

“I’d like you to meet my new friend, Drac.” she said matter of factly. Buddy’s jaw fell open further.5

“But...” he stammered, then fell silent again, jaw snapping shut.6

“Hi there.” said Drac, waving a three-foot silver claw at Buddy as he enjoyed the confusion that he generated among humanoids when they met him in his true form.

Buddy, for once in his life, seemed to be at a loss for words momentarily, then turned and looked up at Tasha. “What in the hells happened while you were gone?”

“Later, I promise. Murrah’s troops are riding on the Nook right now, and Took and Eld need our help.”

“So... we ride the dragon?” he asked, them corrected himself. “Drac, I mean? Sorry.” The last was directed at Drac.

“No problem, and yes, you ride me. And it’s high time we got moving.” Drac lowered himself and extended a foreleg for them to climb up on, and Buddy followed Tasha up as she climbed up and settled herself. He sat behind her, slipping his arms around her waist to hold on, and before Drac launched them all back into the air, she turned around to face Buddy quickly, giving him a sincere smile.

“And thanks. Thanks for coming after me.” she told him.

“Well, yeah.” he said, like there had never been any doubt in his mind, and she thought that there probably never had been. “Not like it did any good, but you’re welcome.” he continued earnestly, and then laughed with sudden joy as Drac shot them into the sky, looking down at the ground with wonderment and glee as it fell away beneath them.

*****

Armehed and Trellcon watched the piles of straw alight, then the mages got done casting their acid spell, and six green-hued bolts of mystical energy streaked towards the defender’s barricade. They hit with a quiet impact, splashing magical acid across the face of it, vapor coming up from the impact as the acid began to eat into the logs that the barricade was constructed of. The logs seemed to begin melting, chunks of them simply disappearing in concave sections under the attack, wisps of vapor coming up. None of the defenders were harmed, however, and Armehed signaled for the mages to strike again. Trellcon turned to look at the piles again, which were beginning to burn quite merrily now, sending flaming bits into the sky as the fire reached higher and higher. “I still wonder what the piles are for...”

That was when the first of the oil pots that the townsfolk had hidden in the piles cooked off and exploded with a ‘frump’, splashing burning oil in every direction, including across their lines of men. Men ran screaming and flaming, The few that rolled onthe ground in an effort to smother the flames only serving to smear the sticky mess across the hay stubble in the field, further spreading the fire.

“Sister-raping sons of WHORES!” yelled Armehed, then the second pile went with equal fury. The attacking lines began to break up as men ran, not a few of them screaming and ablaze.

Across the field, Eld gave a satisfied nod looking at the carnage, trying to ignore the almost overpowering chemical stink of the acid, then turned to Tookey, who was still rubbing handfuls of dirt on a spot of acid that had splashed his armor, trying to get the vicious liquid off before it ate through to the skin. “Where in the hells did you learn to do that?” he asked, pointing at the conflagration that Tookey’s trap had wrought on the enemy lines.

“Weren’t in the hells,” answered Tookey with a fierce grin up at him, before returning his attention to the spot on his armor. “Learned back when I was a pirate, raiding the king’s shipping during the Eastern War.”

A third pile went up with a roar, and Eld returned his gaze to the south fields as the enemy lines broke up completely, trying to get away from the remaining piles. “Never knew you were a pirate.” he said as a fourth pile erupted.

“Well, let’s just keep it quiet, eh, friend?” replied Tookey, then dropped his handful of dirt and picked up his hammer. “Time’s up.” he said, motioning towards the enemy, who was to a man charging their position in an attempt to get away from the blazing death behind them. The archers on their line, Eld among them, began firing as fast as they could nock and draw, hardly bothering to aim.

****

Tasha was talking to Buddy, having to raise her voice to be heard over the rush of wind whipping by her as Drac made all due haste to Talon’s Nook, tearing through the air fast enough to outrun an arrow.

“They doubled their forces somehow.” she said. “I don’t know how.”

“Slavers!” said Buddy. “Fat Murrah’s lieutenant is Trellcon, brother to the slaver Armehed. If they doubled their number, that means that Armehed’s slaver caravan is working with them. But how do you know they doubled their number?”

“The Ancestral Spirits showed me, just a few minutes ago. We’re going to be cutting it real damned close. They were already arrayed for the attack when they were shown to me.”

“If it makes you feel any better, Tookey was preparing some surprises when I left. They might help even the odds some.”

“The odds are about ten to one, from what I saw.”


Buddy thought that over for a second. “Then we probably better hurry.” was his reply, which caused Drac to snort an abrupt chuckle at his bluntness. Drac reached under a scale on his chest, and came out with a silver ring, reaching his claw up his side to where Tasha could reach it.

“Here, take this.” She reached down his side and snagged the ring, looking it over quickly, taking in the magic runes that were inscribed around it and inlaid with gold.

“What’s it for?”

“I made it from one of my scales, melted it down at a dwarven forge with my own breath and had my mother enchant it for me. So long as you wear it, we can communicate telepathically.”

“Tele-what?” asked Buddy.

“It means we can read each other’s minds.” answered Tasha, slipping the ring on.

‘Does it work?’ she heard in her mind.

‘I guess so,’ she thought back. ‘Why, haven’t you tested it yet?’

‘Nope.’ was the reply. ‘Never messed with humanoids much before you, except for dwarven smiths and the like, and they were awful grumpy. I did meet an elf once, but all he wanted to do was sing these horrible, long songs that he had written for some elf maiden. I’m not one for elven music. And I sure as the hells didn’t want to know what he was thinking, so I kept quiet about the ring.’

Tasha laughed, then saw smoke on the horizon. “We’re almost there!” she said aloud, unchaining her glaive.

****

Trellcon and Armehed followed their troops towards the barricade, both of them furious. Their troops had been cut by better than a third by the nasty trick with the oil pots, and the sound of screams and the sickly sweet smell of roasting flesh rode with them as they charged, weapons drawn and screaming for the blood of the defenders. Arrows were nicking into their troops so fast that Trellcon wondered for the first time if they had, in fact, made a mistake, but there was nowhere to go but forward through the defenders, as the piles had ignited the fields behind them and were rapidly burning merry hell on their trail. The smoke was, thankfully, being carried back into the woods by the prevailing breeze and wasn’t obscuring his troop’s view. On the downside, however, it gave the defending archers a clear aim at his charging men, and they were taking full advantage of the clear field of fire. Trellcon saw Armehed’s horse take an arrow to the throat, and go down with a gurgled whinny that sounded like a scream. As he turned to look, Armehed rolled back onto his feet and continued running with the men, sword drawn, so Trellcon turned his attention back forward, never breaking his charge.

****

The first of the charging men to make it through the admirable hail of arrows from the defenders caught Tookey’s hammer full in the chest as he came around the end of the barricade, his chest caving in with a sickening crunch and then falling so fast that his sword continued on without him to clatter softly to a stop in the street behind them.

“Thar be one!” Tookey yelled, drawing back and readying his hammer for the next bandit that dared stray into his range. Eld was too busy to answer; like the rest of the archers on the barricade line, he was firing as fast as he could draw his bow.

****

They broke through the cloud of smoke onto a scene out of hell itself, the fields to the south of Talon’s Nook blazing, the bandit lines running and screaming towards the barricade. She could see Tookey’s massive frame as he stood at he ready. The bandit lines were almost at the barricade itself.

‘Blast a line in front of that barricade to cut off those men, and drop me off in front of it!’ she told Drac through the ring. ‘Make two more passes to box them in, and then drop behind the barricade with Buddy and help the line if anything gets past me!’

‘You’re not going to get yourself killed again, are you?’ replied Drac, swinging around to line up his shot.

‘Maybe,’ she answered him, ‘but I’m thinking that it’s their turn for that.’

A grumbling reply came back to her that she realized was dragon laughter, and then Drac fell from the sky as she closed her eyes and chanted “Ancestral Spirits, guide my hand in battle…”

****

Tookey stood his ground with murder in his eyes as three bandits ran toward his end of the barricade, swords in their hands and screaming their rage at him. He hefted his hammer, adjusting his grip in preparation to swing at the first…

…and the world in front of him exploded into fire with a great hiss and a wave of heat, a line of flame cutting through the three men and continuing along in front of the barricade like divine intervention.

“What in the hells…” he murmured, then a great dark shape swooped low over him, washing him with wind as it flapped it’s great wings to regain altitude as it cleared its pass. He looked up in amazement, mouth falling open as he recognized the silhouette of a dragon against the early afternoon sky, even more amazed to see Buddy waving at him from the back of the beast. And in front of Buddy was…

He turned to Eld, his face breaking into a delighted grin, only to see Eld and the others quit firing as they watched the dragon circle around for another pass.

“Gods bless my eyes, did you see that?” he roared. “It’s Tasha! She’s back! Fight for your lives!”

Eld return his triumphant grin, reaching down for another arrow as he did. “Guess we get to keep the town now?” He said over the crackle of the fire and the screaming of burning bandits.

“Shoot, Gods blast you! SHOOT!”

****

Trellcon was so taken by surprise by the line of fire that he ran down one of his own men who stopped suddenly in front of him. His horse faltered, whinnying in panic, and Trellcon was so enraged by the series of disasters befalling him that for a brief second he wanted to decapitate the stupid beast.

Then he saw the sleek, evil shape of the dragon swooping low over the barricade, blasting his men into screaming, running torches that quickly fell over and lay still. He followed the dragon as it climbed back into the sky to the north, then circled back again, blasting another line of fire at an angle from the first one back to the burning piles, coming closer to him on this pass. His stomach fell as he turned to follow it and saw that the dragon was boxing them in even tighter, and then something fell from the sky on top of him with a jarring thud, knocking him from his horse with a bone-rattling thump that stole his breath as he impacted the soft ground of the south field. His sword flew from his hand, but he was too busy trying to draw air into his lungs to look for it. He was still gasping when he found himself snatched off the ground. As his vision seemed to swim, two furious green eyes appeared before his own, inches away. The hatred in them was almost tangible to the bandit leader.

“YOU!” she snarled into his face. “You are the one who has brought this death here, and you shall share it before this day ends.” She cast her feeling over him, tearing through his memories like a blade through flesh, calling out his crimes as she found them. “Murderer, slaver, thief, matricide, rapist.” She threw him to the ground in disgust, reaching down to scoop up his fallen sword. “And you thought to use this one me, as well.” She said, then stabbed it through his thigh with a quick hard thrust, pinning him to the ground with it. “You will be the last to die, foul Trellcon. You will witness everything before I release you to face your god. You will take the knowledge of every death you’ve caused with you when you depart this plane.”

Trellcon lay gasping, the blade through his thigh like a red-hot poker fresh from the fire, an exquisite blaze of pain that was all-consuming. He grasped the blade and tried to pull it out, but she had run it deep into the ground and it remained firmly anchored.

“VALKYRIE!” the voice of his brother boomed. “Leave him be and fight me if you want your blood, *****!”

Tasha turned to see Armahed approaching cautiously, sword raised at the guard position as he faced her, his face pinched with concentration as he circled around her, trying to buy time for more of his men to come and assist him. She saw that there were about fifteen of them circling up around the two of them, and the circle was drawing the attention of the rest of the men as well. The arrows from the barricade had almost ceased, as the wall of flame there had cut off their view. The forty or so bandits in the fire trap with her that still lived all belonged to her and the Ancestral Spirits, and she felt a rush of energy coursing through her.

“You will NOT spill my brother’s blood without answering to me first, *****.” continued Armehed as Trellcon lay gasping on the ground at her feet.

“You will share his death, fool.” spat Tasha back at him. “You’ve only saved me the trouble of running you down to do it.”

Armehed gave a signal, and the circle of men collapsed on her, all at once. Tasha closed her eyes, and gave herself over to the battle lust completely, letting it guide her trained hands and enchanted weapons without thought. Her body took over, weaving through strikes, slashing, spinning, jumping, rolling, every slice of her ebony blade finding flesh, every parry with her glaive snapping a weapon. Men fell before her onslaught as though grain before the scythe, stacking up behind her as she made her way through them towards Armehed, who stood there in open mouthed shock at the ruthless destruction that she was dealing out. There were so many men screaming at once that the sound ran together like a symphony of the damned, a chorus of the hell-bound. The reek of blood filled the killing ground as fully as the blood itself covered the freshly harvested field.

Just as quickly as it had begun, it ended, and Armehed found himself staring at Tasha. Her green eyes were wide, her nostrils flared, her chest heaving with exertion. She was covered in bits of gore and blood from head to toe, giving her a supremely ghoulish appearance in the midday sun, dimmed as it was by the billowing smoke of the burning field overhead. Realization dawned on Armehed, and he took a quick look around at the fire, momentarily forgotten during the spectacle of the Valkyrie killing spree that he had been watching. The fire was raging all the way around him, blazing to the heavens with crackling joy as it fed off the field, closing in on them.68

“You stupid *****!” he yelled. “You’ve killed us all!” Now that he was aware of it again, he could feel the heat from the fire on him, breaking him out into a sudden sweat.

The Valkyrie shook her head. “You’re not going to have to worry about the fire. You’re not going to live that long.” She advanced as she spoke, the wild look on her face replaced by a grim smile, her eyes narrowed to predatory slits as she closed on him step by slow step.

“Then COME!” he roared in response, brandishing his sword and swinging it back into a guard position again, the fear on his face vanishing into a mask of fierce determination as he faced her down, stepping to the side until they were circling each other.

But instead of charging, the Valkyrie continued to smile at him, tight and vicious. “I have one last thing to tell you before I send you to your pathetic god to be judged as the failure you are. When I am done with you, I shall then kill your brother, and when I am done with him, I shall run Carpatta’s slave traders into the ground for your sins. You have doomed your homeland through your actions. Die with that knowledge, vermin. All that you cherish perishes with you, vermin.”

She lunged across the distance between them, her strike so quick, so furious, that Armehed never even had a chance to defend. He never felt the blow that killed him, and was only aware that he was dead when his head hit the ground face-first and rolled, eyes wide and mouth open in a scream that he no longer had the lungs to vocalize. His last sight was of his decapitated body hitting the ground beside him, spewing blood from the severed stump of his neck, and the limbs twitching. Then darkness closed in.

Trellcon was almost blacked out from the pain in his leg when he felt a thump on his chest and jumped, the searing pain of his panicked jerk flashing him to full consciousness instantly. He looked at the thing that had hit him, and saw his brother’s severed head atop him. He screamed, and then felt the sharp sting of the blade as it passed through his neck as well, and he joined his brother in darkness.

****

Buddy stood atop the barricade, trying to see through the flames and heavy smoke into the killing field, but there was no way to see through the maelstrom of the blaze. The smell of roasting bodies washed over them with increasingly cloying waves, reeking of spoiled pork. Tookey the Keep and Eld Bradlett were behind him, as was Drac, staring for signs of Tasha in the conflagration.

Drac was the most worried, as he couldn’t fly across the flames without crippling his wings and crashing. He wondered how he had thought that her idea had been okay at the time, and quietly cursed himself under his breath at leaving her.

And then Buddy was shouting, jumping up and down on the barricade and pointing across the field. Drac looked, and sure enough, saw a form in the midst of the fire, walking calmly towards them, carrying a round object in each hand. It emerged from the wall of flame, clearing the fire and becoming Tasha, surrounded by a golden glow that was emanating from her glaive where it was hanging from its chain around her neck. The round objects in her hands could be seen as severed heads, dangling by their hair in her clenched fists. She made her way away from the heat of the fire, then she staggered once and fell forward, blacking out as her friends ran to greet her.

****

She awoke to a distant pain of angry wounds, which advanced on her as she roused herself until they were all fresh and thumping in her bones as though she had taken a beating.. She opened her eyes and found herself in a bed, a real feather bed, in a darkened room. As she rustled, she heard the creak of a chair, and Buddy’s face appeared in front of hers, breaking out into a grin as he saw her eyes opened.

“Hey, you.” He said happily. “I was beginning to think that you were going to sleep until the fall reaping.”

“It doesn’t sound like a bad idea.” she grumbled as she sat up in bed, her wounds screaming a plethora of pain at her as she did. She gasped, grabbing the edge of the bed for support as her vision swam with the agony. She felt her glaive heavy on her chest, and reached up to grab it, eyes snapping shut in prayer as she mumbled the healing incantation quietly and fervently. Along her body, she felt nicks and cuts close, bruises faded into nothing. All the minor wounds that she had accumulated fighting the bandits in the killing field quickly healed themselves, leaving her feeling somewhat less than new, but certainly better than she had. She released her tight grip on her glaive and stretched, then erupted into an overwhelming yawn. Her mouth tasted like a cat had **** in it.

“Where are we?” she asked Buddy.

“Tookey’s, of course. You’ve been asleep for about six hours, ever since you stumbled out of the fire.”

The mention of the fire brought her back with startling clarity, and she drew a breath. “Is everyone okay?”

“Sure, everyone but you. We’ve GOT to work on your delegating skills before the next fight. It’s noble of you to try and save us all, but you need to quit fighting armies by yourself like that. You had us all worried, you know.” Buddy’s tone was equal parts humor and concern, a mix that Tasha thought he had down to a duck. She smiled into the half dim room.

“That battle was mine to fight. And enough had been hurt to get me to it.” She reached out and grabbed Buddy’s shoulder fondly. “I was doing what I was born to do, nothing more, and nothing less.”

“Well, consider the fact that I may have been born to help you next time, or I’ll have to rough you up some.” Buddy shot back at her with a crooked grin, thumping his gruller stick on the floor for emphasis.

“I thought that you were just waiting for me to die so you could have your epic ballad?” she said, her voice dripping with friendly sarcasm.

“That would be the tragedy of a lifetime. Of two lifetimes, even. Talon’s Nook was only the first stanza in my epic ballad. How could I call a one stanza ballad an epic?” He gave a chuckle. “No, the other bards would just ridicule me to the hells for having a one stanza epic. I’m afraid that I’ll just have to hang out with you and collect some more stanzas for a while.”

“Lucky me.” replied Tasha with a roll of her eyes, and Buddy couldn’t hold back the laughter or his joy any longer.

****

The next morning Tasha, Buddy and Drac made their goodbyes to the people of Talon’s Nook, especially Tookey and Eld. Drac was still in dragon form, stretched out in the main street, silver scales nearly blinding in the early morning sun as the few people that had remained in town for the fight gathered around them. Runners had been sent out the day before, and the townspeople were just barely beginning to trickle back into the Nook a few at the time, most of them agog at the dragon that rested in town, however friendly he was seeming to be. Tookey in particular was close to being choked up, although the ex-pirate turned innkeep was trying his best not to show it as Tasha hugged his mighty neck in preparation to climbing aboard Drac.

“Fare thee well, Friend Tookey. We shall meet again, and mayhaps next time the circumstances will be friendly instead of dire.”

“Aye, M’lady; that they will, that they will. Won’t be no more sittin’ on our duffs waitin’ to be saved by a whelp of a lass next time, say I true.” replied Tookey, with only the barest hint of a quaver in his voice as he embraced her tightly, nearly cutting off her breath before letting her drop back to the street. She gave him a smile that melted his heart then reached up on her tiptoes and kissed his cheek. She then turned to Eld and stuck her hand out.

“You’ve found a home here, then.” she said.

“I have, at that.” said Eld, taking her hand in his own and clasping it firmly. An odd look crossed his face as he withdrew his hand, looking in surprise at the sheriff’s badge that Tasha had slipped him. “What the hells am I supposed to do with this?” he asked.

“First, I’d round up a posse and ride out to the bandit camp. There’s still the matter of freeing the Carpattan slaves to deal with, and we’re heading in the other direction. After that, just keep things straight here from now on.” She gave him a crooked grin. “Valkyrie blood knows much of the hearts of men, Eld, and your heart is true. You’ll find your path, and Talon’s Nook will be the better for it as well.”

“I don’t know what to say.” Eld murmured, and Tookey clapped him on the back with a broad hand.

“Tell the lady you’ll do it, fool.” Tookey told him, and Eld nodded to her, unceremoniously pinning the badge to his tunic with a broad smile. She looked at them both, and gave an approving nod, then turned and motioned for Buddy to climb up atop Drac, following him up. They both got their seat as Drac rose up on his legs, unfurling his wings and stretching them out as he prepared for flight. Tasha looked down at her friends, and the others who had dared gather close to the dragon to see them off.

“Well, met Talon’s Nook. Well met, my friends.” She gave them a wave that was even more enthusiastically repeated by Buddy, and with a lurch, Drac leapt them into the air, his wings snapping open and shut to carry them off as their friends cheered them away.

****

The castle of the Earl of South Cardia was lavish and large, with towers and battlements constructed of dark grey stone native to the region. The Earl’s chambers were high in a tower that allowed him a grand view of the castle and the surrounding countryside, but it was late at night and he was instead in his bed, a huge four-poster with a silken canopy that glowed dull orange in the firelight that emitted from the hearth. He was gently snoring, his hand resting on the breast of the maiden sleeping next to him, when he felt himself seized around the waist and snatched out of bed. He let out a rough cry, which in turn woke the maiden, who rolled over, promptly screamed in alarm and took off running without even bothering to grab her clothes. Before he could get his bearings, he was outside on his balcony, seized in a mighty silver claw that had his arms pinned to his sides so that he could not move.

You are the Earl of this region?” a voice asked him, and her turned to look to see where it came from. A figure stood on his balcony in a blood red robe, covered from head to foot in it. Beside her was a small boy, who was obviously quite mad, as he was laughing so hard that he could scarcely draw breath, his face the color of overcooked beets. He turned to look at his captor, and found himself staring into a dragon’s eye, at least three hands across its width, and less than two hands from his own face. It was gripping the side of his tower with its claws, hanging there with him so that he was on a level with the balcony. He quickly looked down at the ground beneath his dangling feet, seeming to be thousands of hands down now that he didn’t have the surety of the masonry underneath him.

“Are you the Earl of Southern Cardia, fool, or shall we drop you and keep looking?” asked the voice again, and he found his chin seized and snatched up, facing the darkness inside the hood of the red robe.

“I…” he started, his voice trembling. “Yes, I’m the Earl.”

“Good.” the lady replied. “Then listen closely to me, as this will be the only warning that you get from me. I am the Valkyrie Defender Tasha Lightfoot, and I have just come from Talon’s Nook. Perhaps you’ve heard of it?” she asked, then continued on without giving him a chance to answer. “I know that you HAVE heard of the bandit problem that they were having, as they have sent runners here to the castle to ask for help, and they got none from you, not even a patrol. Only the Taxman showed up, regular as the sunrise. But it’s okay, I did your job for you.” She unclasped her hands, which had been joined in front of her, and shook her arms. A severed head rolled out of each sleeve, thumping onto the masonry of his balcony with twin thuds and rolling to a stop. “Those are the heads of those who I killed to end the reign of the bandits in Talon’s Nook. I’m going to leave them here to remind you of this visit, just in case you decide that is a dream, the result of too much ale perhaps. I have taken the liberty of appointing a new sheriff. You will leave him there, or we will have problems. And should I return and find that they have another issue that you didn’t help them with, then by every god that rules the heavens, you WILL see me again, and your head will be the next to litter the floor of your chambers, do you understand me?”

Eyes wide with fear, the Earl could simply nod his compliance.

“So long as Valkyries walk your region, Earl, you will be held accountable for the safety of those you reign. Do not forget that, or next time we’ll do far worse to you than throw you into your moat with the castle sewage.” She made a motion, and the Earl’s stomach lurched as the dragon pushed off the castle wall and dropped, gliding over the moat and letting go of him. He splashed headfirst and screaming into the moat, coming up unharmed and spitting out the fouled water as he splashed to the edge and clambered up the steep slope, sewage dripping off him.

When he finally made his way back to his chambers later, there was no sign of the lady, the child, or the dragon, save the two severed heads that now rested on the end of his bed, and the word ‘REMEMBER’ which had been hacked into the very stone floor of his balcony.

He did.

THE END...?

Copyright 2008 JS Brown
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Comments (5)
Posted by Kalanna Rai
2008-04-15 22:36:59
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Bravo my friend. An excellent read.
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Posted by Crazy Scott
2008-04-16 06:34:37
Thanks!

I rather thought you might enjoy it... *grins*
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-04-16 13:04:51
that was cool

a great adventure.

had a wonderful trip from beginning to end. packing my lunch for the next one...

well done!!
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Posted by Crazy Scott
2008-04-16 13:16:09
Thanks!

This one is my baby, and I love these characters. I had an absolute blast writing this one, and I'm really glad that you liked it. There will be more...one day.

Really, thank you!
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-05-03 18:27:33
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Well done. I laughed at this line for some reason: "Her mouth tasted like a cat had shit in it", that made me laugh. I think tasha is what the world needs now, an immense power who forces lazy politicians, or earls, to do the right thing when they've been getting away without it. With the good ol threat of violence, which works for me! I think you have a good feel for fantasy, as this series shows. Keep it up
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