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At the Water Hole


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Written by Sharon Chance   
Sunday, 13 April 2008
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At the Water Hole

 

She danced alone

Under the blue haze of neon

Swaying to the music, eyes closed

Dancing with the past

Letting the rhythm guide her

To happier days

 

He watched her from the stage

Taking in skin tight pants, low-cut top

And thought she probably had been pretty, long ago.

Through the smoke and darkness

She maintained an air of mystery

A faded rose, tinged with loneliness

 

His fingers pulled notes from his guitar

As tired and familiar as he,

Once bright and shining, with no where to go but up,

Now he slouched in front of a mic, singing songs

No one really heard anymore,

Chasing the pain away with another bottle of beer.

 

He felt her need wafting across the room

As unaware, she undulated to his music

He caught her eye as she glanced up

And in that second she returned to the present

Shyly brushing her tarnished hair from her eyes

She smiled that smile

That held the message and answer

They both knew so well.

 

Neither one would be alone tonight

Tomorrow would dawn hard and mean

But for a few hours

They would find comfort in tired bodies, fractured minds.

 



Copyright 2008 Sharon Chance
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Comments (4)
Posted by ThomasP3
2008-04-14 04:10:56
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Nice poem. Good description of a rock star that peaked to soon.
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-04-14 04:56:36
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This reminds me of that country song by Joe Diffe..(bigger then the Beatles)...good song and good poem.
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Posted by WordWhore
2008-04-14 09:42:11
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Wow. This is gritty reality at its heartrending best. You have a good eye for character observation. Keep it coming!
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Posted by lorislittlesecret
2008-04-14 11:37:09
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Sad truth about age...and fading promises
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