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Tasha At Talon's Nook -- Chapter One


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Written by J. Brown   
Saturday, 12 April 2008
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Talon's Nook sat at the intersection of three roads and a stream that ran good and strong all year, and not just when the snow was melting atop the distant hills to the east. The stream was not large enough for merchant boats to come this far upstream, but as a source of life for the community it was exceptional. The community was large for a farming community, nearly four hundred people living either in town or less than a days walk from it. It had two saloons, a sheriff with two deputies, and a general mercantile that could get just about anything if you had the gold to pay for it. All in all, it had been a quiet community that sat peaceably and grew steadily for several hundred years without incident.

Then began the infrequent raids on the Southerly road, the one leading three days ride into Innskeep down the stream. The raids didn't stay infrequent long, and before the town knew it, there was a steady fleecing of travelers happening on the Southerly road, and more than a few people simply vanished without a trace. The stories were always the same, of course. The bandits always seemed to show up with at least twice as many people as their targets had, and if the travelers showed the least bit of resistance throats were slit until all their pockets were unburdened of the gold that had been in them. Thus it had been for two years now, and once the bandits had even stormed the jail of Talon's Nook to rescue two of their own that had been taken in drunk from one of the saloons. No less than fifty horsemen rode into town and generally made a nuisance of themselves. The previous sheriff and deputies had died that day at the ends of ropes on a tree right outside town, and the new tenants of the jobs had absolutely no intention of doing anything but living. Help from the regional Earl of South Cardia was not forthcoming, as no one of note ventured into the region to be fleeced as yet, and so it was of no consequence to him. The locals simply tried not to go that way, but as of late, farms had begun to get raided as well. The bandits were growing bolder.

On the northern road, a walking figure topped a small rise that overlooked the town, and paused to take in the view in the early morning sunshine. The figure wore a scarlet cloak that was fixed at the throat and covered them from head to ankle, with matching red boots that had matching plates of red metal attached to them as armor across the top. The hood of the cloak was pulled up over the figure's head, obscuring their face but protecting from the chill air of the morning. The exposed hands that rested by the figures sides were small, and white, and very human. The only visible ornament was a large cross-shaped holy symbol that hung on a fine chain around the figure's neck, laying exposed on the outside of the cloak. Careful observers would also see that the voluminous cloak also concealed a sword on the figure's left hip. After a momentary pause to take in the sight of the town, the figure drew a deep breath and started down the road again towards town, and destiny, and duty.

Tookey the Keep was awakened by tapping. Incessant, intolerable tapping. He let go of the dream that he'd been having about the Smyther sisters and opened his eyes. He'd passed out on the cot behind the bar, he saw, and since he normally woke back up about ten 'o the rooster then that must mean it was earlier than that. He sat up, and rubbed his face, then turned to look at what was making that infernal racket.

A gold piece was being tapped on the bar by a slender white hand. He followed the hand up the explosion of red robes to find a hooded face. Only the chin was exposed to the light, also pale and finely cut. He could barely see that the mouth was turned up in a slight grin. Then he turned his attention back to the right and proper place, which was the gold piece.

"Is it too early in the day for a lady traveler to get a meal here, sir?" she asked in a deep, pleasant voice, the kind of throaty voice that made men forget what they were supposed to be doing and do very stupid things instead. "I'm fresh off the road, and would like some food. And mayhaps a bit of information, if you'd be so kind."

Tookey clambered to his feet. "'Tis a bit early by my standards, M'Lady, but gold e're runs my clock. I can stoke the fire and cook you up a couple of nice burgers to ease your belly, if you'd care."

"That would be wonderful." she replied. "And have you any milk?"

"No, M'Lady, the only things we have here are ale, tea, and occasionally coffee. Today we have ale or tea."

"Tea, please." said the lady, and sat down at the bar, folded her hands, and said no more. Tookey turned and began preparing her meal, but found himself slightly rattled by the encounter. There was something about her that stuck in your mind, and he found it hard to pry the voice from his head. She thanked him when he handed her the tea, sipping it quietly.

"I have your burgers over the fire, M'Lady." He said uselessly, to cover the growing nervousness he felt when he was in her presence.

"Thank you, Tookey." she replied, and he suddenly wondered when he'd told her his name. She took another sip of tea, raised the cup to him in appreciation, then set it down and slid back her hood, revealing herself for the first time. Tookey's breath caught. She was a young woman of about twenty, and had long blond hair with a reddish tint to it. But what grabbed Tookey and held him were the green eyes, piercing, wise, and compassionate, all at the same time. He heard himself gasp for air as his body remembered to breathe, and her only response was a slight smile at the corners of her lips as she sipped her tea again to give him a moment to compose himself. But when she set the tea down and looked him in the eyes again, the smile was gone, and suddenly Tookey found himself slightly afraid of the wisp of a girl. When she spoke this time, it was more quietly, and it held him in thrall.

"I've heard tellings that there is a bandit problem in this area."

"Aye, that there is." said Tookey. "Southerly road out there gets more than it's share. Den of thieves upon it now for two years."

The woman's brow pinched. "Is there no law?"

"The sheriff steps not a foot out of town, M'Lady, and the Earl is equally concerned with the concerns of the Earl." replied Tookey with some amusement, quite pleased with himself to be able to help the young woman. Long after she left, he wondered about how she had affected him so, but when he looked at her, his heart seemed to melt in his chest. And she seemed to know it.

"And there are deaths?"

Tookey nodded, not bothering to elaborate. She pondered this for a moment, then motioned back into the kitchen.

"I smell burgers, Friend Tookey." she said with that sly grin she had, and as soon as she said it, Tookey smelled them, too. He ran back to the kitchen to finish preparing her meal.

Some minutes later, he emerged from the kitchen and set the steaming meat patties and loaf of bread in front of her. She surprised him by wolfing down the first one immediately, without bread and piping hot. He sat and watched with surprise as she made the burger disappear in record time, then started on the second with equal fervor. When she was done, she ate two thin slices of bread, then leaned back with a content smile.

"Very good burgers, my friend Tookey. By the Spirits, I shall not eat again the rest of this day." She picked up her tea and drained it like a woodsman this time, and then rose. Her hand slid across the surface of the bar, and when it pulled back, there were two gold pieces on the counter. Tookey blanched.

"M'Lady, I cannot accept even one from such as yourself. They were only two burgers, not worth a silver..."

"Shhh, Friend Tookey. Put them into your pocket, and heed my words. I shall return to this town inside of a week, and then shall require both more of your wonderful cooking and mayhaps secure a room for the night. I hope to have a horse by then, too, so I'll need direction to a reliable stable, and not one in town. I'd rather my money go to a poor farmer than a rich stablery." She smiled, and Tookey almost swooned. "I do not see the coins in your pocket yet, friend Tookey."

Tookey took the coins from the bar and slid them into his pocket numbly, nodding. As he did, she pulled the cross she wore around her neck from inside the robe where she'd stashed it to eat, and hung it properly again. Then she took the bloated coin purse off the bar where she'd had it and affixed it to the outside of her robe. Tookey shook off some of the fog that was in his head long enough to raise his finger and point at the valuables she was exposing.

"M'Lady, I'm not so sure that is a good idea."

She smiled at him. "Then I daresay you'll like my next even less."

"And what idea would that be?" asked Tookey, with waning enthusiasm.

"I'm going to travel down the Southerly road." she said, pulling her hood up over her head again as she turned to leave.

"And what of the bandits, M'Lady?"

She paused. "Any man foolish enough to draw weapons against me dies where he stands. I'll see you soon, Friend Tookey. Remember to engage me a stable, please." With that she walked out the door, but not before Tookey noticed something. Her boots were clean. Not spotless, but not the slightest bit trail-worn, either. Certainly not the boots of a person who has been walking the roads like she said, and she admitted that she had no horse. So if she didn't walk, where the hell did she come from? Tookey eased out the door behind her, watching her walk down the street to the edge of town, her cloak gently wafting in the breeze of the morning. His head was losing that fuzziness that it had had while she was here, but even so he found himself already hoping for her return as she had promised.



Copyright 2008 J. Brown
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Comments (4)
Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-04-15 02:14:27
well alrighty then...

i was playing the profile game yesterday and when i saw the series i said - i gotta remember to read that...

then i clicked the link and said - sure are a lot of words there (i'm allergic to lots of words )...

then i read the words...

nice.

now i have to read the rest...
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Posted by Crazy Scott
2008-04-15 12:50:12
*laughs*

If you're allergic to a lot of words, then all that I can say is I'm sorry. I, uh, tend to get long-winded when I write, and it's not very often that I have a story come in anywhere under 2,500 words. This series ran seven chapters, and all the last few but one tended more towards 5K words.

To include detail, and dialogue, and some backstory, and that sort of thing just eats my page alive, but it makse me smile when I'm done...

Glad you liked this one so far. It's my heart and soul, and I have plans for a further story arc with the main characters...
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-04-15 22:37:30
....

off to an interesting start. I am intrigued by a few things... that Talons nook has survived for 'several hundred years' while making me think of an old western town, the main character has a sword and a cross while speaking in an accent that to me is puritan english... and burgers? I'll read part two soon
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Posted by Crazy Scott
2008-04-16 06:27:02
Dang it...

I have a thing for westerns, and I'm afraid that most of my 'archaic' settings in my stories end up having a western feel to them. Apparently, I can't help myself in that regard. And when I wrote it, I was hungry for a hamburger, so I tossed that in. I guess the good thing about fantasy is that you can make up the fact that in the world of Cardia, they invented meat grinders a long dang time ago... *laughs*

You're NOT the first person to call me out on those two things, if you were wondering... later on, I have a HUGE snafu in that I have them harvesting hay in the spring. It's plot specific, so I can't change it until I do the massive edit that I have planned for later on this year, at which point the entire story will take place in the fall, instead of spring so I can accomodate the harvest.
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