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I'm sorry


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Written by b.k.   
Thursday, 10 April 2008
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Nothing's ever good enough,

Everything is wrong,

I'm just another failure,

In your sad and lonely song,

 

 

I see the pain I've caused you,

It shows plainly in your eyes,

I wish I was everything you wanted,

But it would just be lies,

 

 

I find myself repeating,

The same apologies again and again,

I honestly do try,

I do all that i can,

 

 

I want to make it work,

But once again my efforts are weak,

Happiness and someone to love,

Is all that I seek,

 

 

I know I've hurt you,

And I've said sorry before,

But maybe you'll come back,

If I say it once more



Copyright 2008 b.k.
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Comments (5)
Posted by sgulab
2008-04-10 13:52:26
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ive written something like this. :D
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Posted by Roadkill315
2008-04-10 14:24:32
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Simple, easy to follow top to bottom, thanks
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-04-10 19:13:47
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another great poem. what more can i say.
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Posted by lobiva nadha
2008-04-27 02:16:55
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hmmmmm!! it so touching
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Posted by Egoist
2008-05-03 14:37:33
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Wow, this is very touching. It's rare to find people who actually admit to their own flaws unless truly in love. This poem almost feels fake to me, since I've never met someone like that. Very simple and adoring, no one such as this should have been ever hurt by someone else.
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