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the zen days: a mini-collective
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Written by Kaija Alexandra Thom   
Wednesday, 09 April 2008

A/N: ancient archaeic poems that i love to hate and hate to love. a snapshot of where i was, you could say

i 
elevator music
your an early morning
cigarette out on the porch--
a lousy addiction.

can we ****?
nonono,

im still solo
on this spring mattress
waiting for your return.

 

ii
a pitch in the park
sweet kelly
upon tidal highlands
& a thick smog dispatch
upon the roof of my
mouth.

i was so condescending

i packed an
early morning basin
and (toke. park. smoke.)
we had miners' lungs
east by south. 

 

iii
oxy kisses
its not a blunt
on the park bench,
its oxycodone
with static highs.

radio transmissions
from the stratosphere
--my lips were pressed
to a saline sky.

 

iv
piano keys

i have snow in my vision,
coloured creamy but faded
like a pallid flower of new
spring.

his white love is calling
madam, do you fancy cocaine ?
 
 
v
white trunks
below blue skies,
in the middle
of july.

caught in a
dandelion storm
on the breeze,

we patronized
past friends on
our skinned
knees.
 
 
vi
bloom

bleached between shivers,
we were lost in a love storm
below lurid lights.

i smiled in the morning.
were you cold beneath
winter heights ?

i kissed my
girlhood goodbye  

 
 
 

 

 

 



Copyright 2008 Kaija Alexandra Thom
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-08 13:57:29
ZEN

ELEVATOR MUSIC--do you mean 'you're' instead of 'your'? I thought this was simple and good. I pictured a heroin junkie while reading this. I liked it.

A PITCH IN THE PARK-- pretty magical. I liked it.

OXY KISSES--not much i can really think to say about this one. It was good, but don't have words to express myself about it.

PIANO KEYS--this is like a collection of drug poems, eh? I like them. The last line made me crack a laugh. pretty cool Poem.

WHITE TRUNKS--this was really great! I love the two words dandelion and storm put together. You've really captured a picture with this one.

BLOOM--Pretty damn good Poem. It was like all of these were telling a story of a girl and her life. And it ends with her girlhood. Pretty slick. Great job on all of these!
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Posted by dockyard
2008-08-09 14:25:07
....

that was a time in my life when i was a collection of drug poems.

and he was a heroin addict, yes. but i was just a coke head
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