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Written by Kaija Alexandra Thom   
Wednesday, 09 April 2008
where kaija krakken creeps

an ocean feather snuffs it in an alcove, to my left
just another pair of lungs to expand and swill the sea
and i wave curtly to the ***** on the next corner
(nothing to see nothing to see) kindling
her shoulders against the lamp-post she
looks more like an angler than a good time
and paint by number peeling swips, lightning strikes
upon her hips and the smoke machine pumps nicotine
through out my veins, on the verge of something
epic

glitter lines the gutter with a sunless pulse all its own
and concrete currents sweep the ground beneath my feet
as i exit the aphotic zone:

ale stained blouses and hardened nipples
make my artist type jealous beneath the soft neons
of the brickyard pizza sign    the whirlpool opens with a
sureness of free beer to soften my mind
and i've done this enough for the anxiety to subside
so i kick off these shoes and i

DIVE

into a plethora of flannel jackets
and guys named 'steve'

Copyright 2008 Kaija Alexandra Thom
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Comments (3)
Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-04-13 11:39:09
Wow

You are really talented! Superb imagery!
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Posted by dockyard
2008-04-15 05:58:30
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=D

thanks, miss
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-07 11:22:55
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Fantastic imagery!

This was really deep and written extremely well. I like your style. This is just great. The last line made me laugh, though. The rest of it took my breath away. This is going in my favorites.

Superb
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