If The Sun Didn't Rise

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Awakening of Minds (Part One)

So there I was, looking once more at the device on the...

The Love of My Life


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Written by August Blackwood   
Monday, 07 April 2008

Note: Highlight the poem to read it. :)

 

Am I not a beast, in your awakening eyes?

If not, I wish whole-heartedly for the embrace of your warm arms.

If you wish to cradle and caress the heart that is extending out from my chest to you,

Come a little closer and your desires shall be granted, plain and simply, yet not abruptly.

Make your presence known unto me

And ensure that my arms are locked in place.

Keep me close to your chest

So that your beating heart becomes one with my own, your breathing like mine

And so that I may experience the simple pleasures of your living body

And elliminate the pains that came before and might come after

In both my bosum and yours.

For tonight, all is buried

And nothing distant exists between us.



Copyright 2008 August Blackwood
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Comments (6)
Posted by lorislittlesecret
2008-04-07 10:58:23
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I probably would have liked it if it were easier to read. I know..I am blind. No seriously, when fonts are funky, my brain doesn't concentrate on what it is reading
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-04-07 11:02:14
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I see only 4 blue words...did you use white on white?
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-04-07 11:04:37
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ok,,,not i understand,,,i need to highlight,,,it pays to read,,,,,
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-04-07 11:07:41
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good poem and neat idea,,,sometimes this site needs something a lil different.
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Posted by mayumi
2008-04-07 12:22:12
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cute...i like your style :)
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Posted by Kasi elaborated
2008-07-15 21:49:09
Phantom Poem

What pretty words, this can't be the same person you spoke of in " Married and with Children". A very interesting way to present this piece, I have never even thought to do something like that.
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