dry your tears now up my dear
bring back the smile you used to wear
let again your lively voice be heard
and so were your joyous laughters

there were just times in our life
when we feel so lost and so down
there were just men along the way
who'll made us fall then walk away

but never ever let them see
how many tears you've spent for them
though how devastated you may be
just don't ever let them see

just remember in all goodbyes
lots of hellos still await
for every men who made us cry
still there's more who'll bring us smile

so cheer up my dear, cheer up
lots of your life's still ahead
save your heart for one true love
who'll surely come so you just wait!

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Posted by Vango 2008-04-07 10:02:29 .... Really good poem. + Report this comment
Posted by mayumi 2008-04-07 10:08:52 .... thanks :) + Report this comment
Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-04-07 10:13:27 .... Sweet...as you get older, it gets less true + Report this comment
Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-04-07 10:14:00 .... Good message in this poem I believe, well written. Thanks + Report this comment
Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-04-07 10:16:29 ,,, :) need to let my 15 year old read this...nice poem + Report this comment
Posted by mayumi 2008-04-07 11:26:14 .... lol! i can agree to that,i've written this poem years ago and now i'm less hopeful + Report this comment
Posted by ThomasP3 2008-04-07 11:35:28 .... "Cheer up" Good words for everyone! A nice poem. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-05-12 18:01:47 .... yea this was a good raising of spirits. i almost felt like it was a resistance against heartbreakers. nice job. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-07-01 18:54:53 .... Very nice! If only age didnt change things. + Report this comment
Posted by elenalda 2008-07-04 22:26:30 .... Sweet. There's bugs in the rhyme scheme (the first stanza especially) and the rhythm has problems in that it's not parallel and it should be, but that doesn't stop it from being a sweet poem. + Report this comment
Posted by CliffMitchell 2008-07-05 12:55:53 .... When I read this, I pictured a young lady arranging her hair in front of a vanity mirror thinking to herself. A very dainty and sweet writing full of poetic hope and sincerity. Good job. + Report this comment
Posted by Xena 2008-07-05 23:09:38 this poem was good. the rythm and song that it had was alright but maybe you can cleaan it up a bit in the middle.. it looks like it just ate a little bit to much.. you know + Report this comment
Posted by brandon_scott 2008-07-06 15:30:56 .... Good poem. Wise words of hope and perseverance. Keep it up. + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-07-06 19:04:52 .... Wow! I really liked the first stanza. It had just a nice tone and an awesome floy to it. espesially the first two lines. but dont get me wrong, the entire poem was really good. great work! + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-07-06 19:06:56 .... eek! I meant it had an awesome FLOW to it. i hate when i mispell words. its because i type to fast. i ... just ... have ... to ... slow ... down ... + Report this comment
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