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I want to Believe


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Written by Michelle Huff   
Monday, 07 April 2008
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I want to believe

In rainbows and unicorns

In magic castles and spaces

And far away places

 

I want to believe

In frogs turned into princes

In life turned into riches

Where the shoe fits the princess

 

I want to believe

In love at first sight

At soul mates in the night

At true love in the light

 

I want to believe

In happily ever afters

In fairy tale lives

In true love evermore

 

I want to believe

That what you say is true

That you love me through and through

That you love me like I love you

 

I want to believe

That fairy tales exist

That you are my white knight

And our feelings are eternal

 

I want to believe

That I am the only one

That I am your ray of sun

But something makes you run

 

But I know

Fairy Tales don't come true

At least not for me....

Show me I am special.

 

Prove I am the only one

Prove that you love me

Prove that you think of me

Prove that I am yours and you are mine

 

I want to believe......



Copyright 2008 Michelle Huff
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Comments (11)
Posted by Roadkill315
2008-04-07 10:07:38
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Very nice poem Michelle. Reminds me of someone I once knew who was all about show me but not much about reciprocating the same. Thank goodness for rear view mirrors.
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Posted by thirteen
2008-04-08 07:09:49
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Sad poem, she seems that she has given up hope.Lovely poem though.
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Posted by lorislittlesecret
2008-04-08 09:02:17
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Haven't we all? Given up hopes of fairy tales I mean?
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-04-08 09:52:19
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You see, thats why we need the last 25 most recently posted on the front here, instead of the 13 thats on there now...this just flew right past, and a good poem was missed by many im sure. I think this was your best one to date, and youve had a lot of good ones. Enjoyed.
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-04-09 15:42:53
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i think we all need to believe in something to keep our souls from spiraling down into despair. i enjoyed this and i felt the sad tone expressed in here. nicely written.
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Posted by P.C. Atwell
2008-04-12 08:26:25
thank you

it was a good poem, thank you for sharing
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-04-13 02:24:43
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Doubt is the relationship killer... A good poem michelle, very heartfelt
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Posted by lobiva nadha
2008-04-13 22:34:05
yea

this really is nice,, and touching. Reallyy , when I read through I could see that frog changing to price and those fairy tales.

I loved it
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-06-12 10:44:50
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i read three and so far this one if my favorite, but I'm not done
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-09-04 14:46:03
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Have you found the proof that you are looking for? I hope so. I have. So I know that true love is real and is possible to come true. Good job.
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Posted by the Processor
2008-09-29 13:55:57
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this was a great piece..very good..now that I know you a little better I can "feel" your words within this one
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