COME INTO MY ARMS - The Arrival, Chapter 1 Sophia saw the new arrival from her bedroom... DOG George Sandler was a big boy. He was ten years...

hard to sleep sometimes

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Written by p. matthew radosevich

Sunday, 06 April 2008

Share it: The noise and hot wind combined,tear through my soal like a train and in vain i weep the tears of a thousand men and a thousand tears.My life from the start wasnt art,wasnt smiles,a child who was born to loose and choose,not a word i ever heard,a dream ripped at the seams before the taste of life touched the soal and told me run before i could walk and sing before i could talk.The busses and trains,the noise and bad boys,evil toys,a mess and a weight on my chest before i could breath.Before life had a chance to tell me thers more.I swore my gift would uplift and moveme from the slum.I was burned into and not another dead flower.My power was within but the days i encountered pulverised and shredded my every bright thought,every dream and every goal,repeated the sword that fell upun my vunerable head.I am but one,the son of wind and rain and my pain will help me gain the strength  i need and bleed spirits and music and art...I see...I see...I see....I have to believe in me.   Copyright 2008 p. matthew radosevich Keyword: hard to sleep sometimes Report this story | Add to Favorites | Send to Friends | Author's Profile No Comments posted Comments (9) Posted by Xena 2008-04-07 01:04:32 that guy in the picture doesnt look scary at all. kinda like those guys in the halloween costume ads..but anywho some parts were i thought were good.. others id think you were foreign... or drunk + Report this comment Posted by Roadkill315 2008-04-07 07:14:09 .... The spelling and sentence structure ussies aside, I enjoyed the storyline of this poem. Nice message in it. + Report this comment Posted by ThomasP3 2008-04-07 08:15:32 .... I think the last sentence had alot to say, and made a great point. But with all due respect, I did have a difficult time following or understanding the rest. + Report this comment Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-04-07 10:27:18 .... Call me dumb...I don't understand this... + Report this comment Posted by spikedappa 2008-04-13 08:42:37 that guy id pay more attention to the words than the picture,hes not supposed to be a "scary guy"...lol...but when i start my childrens stories,THOSE will have alot of pictures,im sure you will enjoy.Also,I have been drunk on foreign land(mexico,europe),but i am not the 2 together....lol...thanx for your inspiring comment....P.matthew Radosevich + Report this comment Posted by spikedappa 2008-04-13 08:44:02 dumb lol.....its whatever you want it to be,your not dumb,just honest...lolty P.Matthew Radosevich + Report this comment Posted by spikedappa 2008-04-13 08:45:32 structure Oh god....Im terrible at the whole "structure"and "spelling"process.....lol Im working on it though,thanx for your comment....P.Matthew Radosevich + Report this comment Posted by spikedappa 2008-04-13 08:50:18 oh...by the way What it REALLY means is that he dosent want to end up a peice of crap from his piece of crap neighborhood like everyone else did + Report this comment Posted by anozira 2008-04-22 16:25:32 .... spelling aside... I really liked it!!! =) + Report this comment Post a comment Post a comment

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