I stare at her and she stares back. But there is nothing in her eyes. Empty and cold. I know I should leave, call someone, do something, but I cant. I sit down next to her and stroke her hair. She’s so cold. I grab a blanket and wrap her in it. So quiet. So still. I don’t understand it. I don’t want to. she is here. Shell never leave me. Never.. never…never…..

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Posted by Xena 2008-04-04 17:35:58 well thats good + Report this comment
Posted by R.E.Potter 2008-04-04 17:42:19 ,,, Is this about a dead dog? + Report this comment
Posted by Roadkill315 2008-04-05 06:42:03 .... Yeah, or is it about some other kind of roadkill? + Report this comment
Posted by SageSyren 2008-04-22 09:24:57 .... Doesn't sound like a dog to me. If it was a dog wouldn't they have put fur and not hair. Sounds like a tragic accident happened and they lost someone they loved. Nice start. Would love to hear what happened before this part. + Report this comment
Posted by Vango 2008-04-22 18:12:52 .... I'm intrigued, I need to read more. + Report this comment
Posted by Darkness.of.Mystery 2008-04-22 18:25:35 .... That was capturing and I agree with Vango: "I need to read more." + Report this comment
Posted by Something Indecent 2008-05-06 10:52:33 .... Creeeeeeeeeeepy. + Report this comment
Posted by cookingWine 2008-05-07 17:35:05 .... Hm. A beginning in an ending. + Report this comment
Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 2008-09-09 02:50:53 never it takes a little while to get use to the compactness of what you write... you do manage to push a thought across with few words. a pleasure to read. write on! + Report this comment

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