Posted by ThomasP3 2008-04-04 07:08:42 ....
This made me think. I liked it. It could mean something different to many people, I think. No matter what side of the aisle you fall on. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Captain Morgen 2008-04-04 18:31:19 ....
Its well written and the idea is definitely original. Though it doesn't seem like it has actually ended. Just a little more clarification is need in the last line. Just a suggestion though. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by lorislittlesecret 2008-04-08 07:38:41 ....
I am not sure what to make of this...especially when a lot of your stuff is so light-hearted + Report this comment |  |
Posted by SA Dave 2008-04-13 14:14:34 ....
I was in the mood for writing one day and found myself in a coffee shop staring at an empty page in my notebook, as if often the case. Because the front of the shop was so bright with windows, the back of the shop seemed dark and noisy. Somewhere back there, a baby was screaming blue murder. It was a bit distracting, but I really wasn't giving it a lot of thought. Then, the woman beside me said, "What the hell are they doing, killing babies back there?" That was the trigger from which this poem came to life. + Report this comment |  |