To Her Whom Cancer Took

It wasn't her that lost faith, 'twas I....

Birth of the White Buffalo

The bell hanging from the handle of the door...


smiles


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Written by shirin   
Thursday, 03 April 2008
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I hardly remember what I had for dinner last night but it's a wonder that I can remind his face clearly even after 20 years… 

 I saw him in a distance at first but I thought I never had been this close to any one; not only by my soul even with my whole body.  It was a party, kind of boring to me cause I didn't know someone; just hardly the hostess,  I sat there all alone gazing into dance floor and my eyes were not fixed at anyone, just dancing couples and colorful dresses, which made a spiral colorful world…

 "…"I felt somebody called my name, while raising my head, I saw a deep smile on a stranger's face, of course he was a stranger but barely seemed so acquaintance… he was standing behind the spiral world, I wondered how could I recognize his smile, he was not handsome but he was cute with glasses, pale face and black curly hair and that beautiful smile…his face had nothing to make people interested at first glance but he sent something invisible to me, like some magnetic wave which made me shake, No! Not only shake even more, I felt something began to grow in my heart!! I just remembered that he was coming toward me! Love; I never thought it could happen this fast but there it was!   And…no…Nothing more! It was a marriage hall, we were looking at each other face he was smiling, I said" I do", then just people around us with smiles and desire to wish us the best… 

…I was in a hospital holding a new born baby; he was there smiling at us…  And then a grave with a wreath on it, a baby boy was crying sticking to my feet, I wore a black suit, moaners who cried, and me, crying?…no! I was smiling… My life flashed back just in these simple scenes… I tell them that I was always like this but they insist that my memory grows weaker and weaker after his dead.  I keep telling them but they seem not to understand, they are so far to know that my life is just smiles, just his smiles… 

 



Copyright 2008 shirin
Keyword: smiles
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Comments (3)
Posted by thirteen
2008-04-03 12:35:07
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I didn't get it, but its probbally me.
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Posted by bubbly
2008-07-06 00:32:22
wow

hi! shirin.

so he's living through ur smiles. brilliant. no ending could've been better than this. keep it up. lol. ;-)
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Posted by indianaman130
2008-07-06 00:39:28
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Did they have a life together? was her vision of the spiral world just that, a vision, or did some of it come true before he died? A lot left out. I like it, but it can be better.
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