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Written by Anna DeVine   
Wednesday, 02 April 2008
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Hey, when yer neck's vein bulges out
In its psychotic way
I really cannot concentrate
On what yer trying to say

I fixate on its angry pulse
And think, 'It's gonna blow'
So then I have to bite my cheek 
Before a smile can show

Oi!, now yer face is crazy red
Yet yer seem unaware
I'm just amazed how well yer yell
Without a breath of air

Oh cool, we're at the tally stage
Err...yeah, yer told me twice
But I don't count the first two times
'Cause they weren't told so nice 

 





 


 

Copyright 2008 Anna DeVine
Keyword: Dark Sarky
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Comments (5)
Posted by gsaracen
2008-04-02 08:36:45
nice

simple and effective! BTW...I NEED a link to that graphic... it's too cool!
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Posted by R.E.Potter
2008-04-02 08:59:39
,,,

This was clever, I can hear her yelling now.
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Posted by Roadkill315
2008-04-02 11:07:30
....

Ah, I hear her laughing and laughing hard and walking away.
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Posted by SA Dave
2008-04-02 11:57:19
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Very clever. You're quite a talent and an inspiration.

Dave
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-04-02 17:09:29
never did

understand that yelling concept... have a hard time figuring out if I am willing to argue...
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